On Fri, Aug 21, 2020 at 3:52 PM Bruce Momjian <br...@momjian.us> wrote:

>
> > Agreed, this doc area needs help.
>
> I developed the attached patach for this.  Is this sufficient?
>

For consistency I would change "statement" to "command" at the end of that
paragraph .

      the <xref linkend="sql-call"/> command.

and to contrast with "a part of" I would modify the following fragment to
read:

    a procedure is called in isolation

Taken together:

While a function is called as part of a query or DML command, a procedure
is called in isolation using the <xref linked="sql-call"/> command.

And then swap the order of, and tweak, the transaction and isolation
sentences:

[...] the CALL command.  If the CALL command is not part of an explicit
transaction a procedure can also manage multiple transactions during its
execution.

David J.

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