> On 30 Aug 2020, at 17:21, Tom Lane <t...@sss.pgh.pa.us> wrote: > > Thomas Munro <thomas.mu...@gmail.com> writes: >> + The discussions in this chapter assume that you are working with >> + an unmodified version of <productname>PostgreSQL</productname>, >> + for example one that you built from source according to the directions >> + in the preceding chapters. If you are working with a pre-packaged > >> Rather than "unmodified", would it be better to say something more >> like "without any extra supporting infrastructure"? > > So maybe "... you are working with plain > <productname>PostgreSQL</productname> without any additional > infrastructure, for example a copy that you built from source > according to the directions in the preceding chapters." ?
That seems pretty clearly worded to me. > Do you have a feeling one way or the other about whether to repeat > some of this text in each of the relevant sub-sections? I initially > didn't want to do that, but thinking about how people consume the > HTML docs, I'm afraid that anything not appearing on the same page > won't get seen. I think you're right here, duplicating the content is probably required for it to be useful. cheers ./daniel
