Hi! I've come across some minor inconsistencies in PostgreSQL 14 docs. Please review the attached patch.
-- Ekaterina Kiryanova Technical Writer Postgres Professional file:///home/ladyune/patches/minor_doc_fixes.patch
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/btree.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/btree.sgml index f569f93f352..a9200ee52e6 100644 --- a/doc/src/sgml/btree.sgml +++ b/doc/src/sgml/btree.sgml @@ -664,7 +664,7 @@ options(<replaceable>relopts</replaceable> <type>local_relopts *</type>) returns certain implementation-level heuristics will fail to identify and delete even one garbage index tuple (in which case a page split or deduplication pass resolves the issue of an incoming new tuple not - fitting on a leaf page). The worst case number of versions that + fitting on a leaf page). The worst-case number of versions that any index scan must traverse (for any single logical row) is an important contributor to overall system responsiveness and throughput. A bottom-up index deletion pass targets suspected @@ -706,7 +706,7 @@ options(<replaceable>relopts</replaceable> <type>local_relopts *</type>) returns This is expected with any B-Tree index that is subject to significant version churn from <command>UPDATE</command>s that rarely or never logically modify the columns that the index covers. - The average and worst case number of versions per logical row can + The average and worst-case number of versions per logical row can be kept low purely through targeted incremental deletion passes. It's quite possible that the on-disk size of certain indexes will never increase by even one single page/block despite @@ -811,7 +811,7 @@ options(<replaceable>relopts</replaceable> <type>local_relopts *</type>) returns constraints) to use deduplication. This allows leaf pages to temporarily <quote>absorb</quote> extra version churn duplicates. Deduplication in unique indexes augments bottom-up index deletion, - especially in cases where a long-running transactions holds a + especially in cases where a long-running transaction holds a snapshot that blocks garbage collection. The goal is to buy time for the bottom-up index deletion strategy to become effective again. Delaying page splits until a single long-running diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/catalogs.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/catalogs.sgml index 2f0def9b19a..0e590059e89 100644 --- a/doc/src/sgml/catalogs.sgml +++ b/doc/src/sgml/catalogs.sgml @@ -13116,7 +13116,7 @@ SELECT * FROM pg_locks pl LEFT JOIN pg_prepared_xacts ppx <structname>pg_stats_ext_exprs</structname> is also designed to present the information in a more readable format than the underlying catalogs — at the cost that its schema must be extended whenever the structure - of statistics in <link linkend="catalog-pg-statistic"><structname>pg_statistic</structname></link> changes. + of statistics in <link linkend="catalog-pg-statistic-ext"><structname>pg_statistic_ext</structname></link> changes. </para> <table> diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/ref/alter_subscription.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/ref/alter_subscription.sgml index bec5e9c483f..db9713e6667 100644 --- a/doc/src/sgml/ref/alter_subscription.sgml +++ b/doc/src/sgml/ref/alter_subscription.sgml @@ -65,8 +65,8 @@ ALTER SUBSCRIPTION <replaceable class="parameter">name</replaceable> RENAME TO < <para> Commands <command>ALTER SUBSCRIPTION ... REFRESH PUBLICATION</command> and - <command>ALTER SUBSCRIPTION ... {SET|ADD|DROP} PUBLICATION ...</command> with refresh - option as true cannot be executed inside a transaction block. + <command>ALTER SUBSCRIPTION ... {SET|ADD|DROP} PUBLICATION ...</command> with <literal>refresh</literal> + option as <literal>true</literal> cannot be executed inside a transaction block. These commands also cannot be executed when the subscription has <literal>two_phase</literal> commit enabled, diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/ref/commit.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/ref/commit.sgml index 5f244cdd3c1..43f9e984bcc 100644 --- a/doc/src/sgml/ref/commit.sgml +++ b/doc/src/sgml/ref/commit.sgml @@ -97,7 +97,7 @@ COMMIT; <para> The command <command>COMMIT</command> conforms to the SQL standard. The - form <literal>COMMIT TRANSACTION</literal> is a PostgreSQL extension. + form <literal>COMMIT TRANSACTION</literal> is a <productname>PostgreSQL</productname> extension. </para> </refsect1> diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/ref/initdb.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/ref/initdb.sgml index 3d888387126..9d47cacbe0b 100644 --- a/doc/src/sgml/ref/initdb.sgml +++ b/doc/src/sgml/ref/initdb.sgml @@ -283,7 +283,7 @@ PostgreSQL documentation By default, <command>initdb</command> will write instructions for how to start the cluster at the end of its output. This option causes those instructions to be left out. This is primarily intended for use - by tools that wrap <command>initdb</command> in platform specific + by tools that wrap <command>initdb</command> in platform-specific behavior, where those instructions are likely to be incorrect. </para> </listitem> diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/ref/psql-ref.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/ref/psql-ref.sgml index fcab5c0d51a..5ef401916f2 100644 --- a/doc/src/sgml/ref/psql-ref.sgml +++ b/doc/src/sgml/ref/psql-ref.sgml @@ -1936,9 +1936,9 @@ testdb=> <para> The status of each kind of extended statistics is shown in a column named after its statistic kind (e.g. Ndistinct). - "defined" means that it was requested when creating the statistics, + <literal>defined</literal> means that it was requested when creating the statistics, and NULL means it wasn't requested. - You can use pg_stats_ext if you'd like to know whether <link linkend="sql-analyze"> + You can use <structname>pg_stats_ext</structname> if you'd like to know whether <link linkend="sql-analyze"> <command>ANALYZE</command></link> was run and statistics are available to the planner. </para> diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/spgist.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/spgist.sgml index 18f1f3cdbd8..b8b6d6b8e7d 100644 --- a/doc/src/sgml/spgist.sgml +++ b/doc/src/sgml/spgist.sgml @@ -875,7 +875,7 @@ typedef struct spgLeafConsistentOut <para> Note: the <function>compress</function> method is only applied to - values to be stored. The consistent methods receive query scankeys + values to be stored. The consistent methods receive query <structfield>scankeys</structfield> unchanged, without transformation using <function>compress</function>. </para> </listitem> diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/test-decoding.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/test-decoding.sgml index fe7c9783fac..cf736bd41af 100644 --- a/doc/src/sgml/test-decoding.sgml +++ b/doc/src/sgml/test-decoding.sgml @@ -40,8 +40,8 @@ postgres=# SELECT * FROM pg_logical_slot_get_changes('test_slot', NULL, NULL, 'i </para> <para> - We can also get the changes of the in-progress transaction and the typical - output, might be: + We can also get the changes of the in-progress transaction, and the typical + output might be: <programlisting> postgres[33712]=#* SELECT * FROM pg_logical_slot_get_changes('test_slot', NULL, NULL, 'stream-changes', '1');