Here are some minor change suggestions which may help in improving
readability.
It is your prerogative to accept or reject

Doc : https://www.postgresql.org/docs/17/install-make.html

*Actual Text*

If you are upgrading an existing system be sure to read Section 18.6
<https://www.postgresql.org/docs/17/upgrading.html>, which has instructions
about upgrading a cluster.

*Proposed*
If you are upgrading an existing system, be sure to read Section 18.6
<https://www.postgresql.org/docs/17/upgrading.html>, which has instructions
about upgrading a cluster.

Hi,

Suggesting minor improvements in
https://www.postgresql.org/docs/17/install-make.html
to enhance readability.


*Change*
  Added comma between  "system and be"
--

To keep the text consistent, built might be replaced by build.

*Actual Text*

If you *built* with debugging support, stripping will effectively remove
the debugging support

*Proposed*

If you *build* with debugging support, stripping will effectively remove
the debugging support

*Change*
  Replaced built by build

*Actual Text*
All files will be installed under /usr/local/pgsql by default.

*Proposed*
 By default, all files will be installed under /usr/local/pgsql.

*Actual Text*

(Remember to use GNU make.) The build will take a few minutes depending on
your hardware.
*Proposed*
The build will take a few minutes, depending on your hardware (remember to
use GNU make).


*Actual Text*

use ./configure --help to get one that is

*Proposed*

use ./configure --help to see all options.

or

use ./configure --help to list all options.


Regards,
Muhammad Ikram,
Bitnine Global

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