Alvaro Herrera wrote:
> Excerpts from Bruce Momjian's message of lun feb 21 00:21:37 -0300 2011:
> > 
> > Applied.
> 
> I think this paragraph is a bit strange:
> 
> +  This chapter describes how to create and manage roles.
> +  More information about the effects of privileges on various database
> +  objects can be found in <xref linkend="ddl-priv">.
> 
> Note that it says it's going to talk about roles and suddenly talks
> about privileges, without saying how those two concepts are linked.  I
> think an extra phrase is missing in the middle of those two; not sure
> exactly what.

Good point.  I think it was missing the word "role", which I have added:

  This chapter describes how to create and manage roles.
  More information about the effects of role privileges on various
                                        ----
  database objects can be found in <xref linkend="ddl-priv">.

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  + It's impossible for everything to be true. +

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