On Wed, Apr 25, 2012 at 10:35 AM, Kevin Grittner <
[email protected]> wrote:

> > "Kevin Grittner" <[email protected]> writes:
> >> How do people feel about "TL;DR:" being used at the start of a
> >> Wiki page to which we want to direct users?
>
> Tom Lane <[email protected]> wrote:
> > I think it's a pretty lousy way to start off this page in
> > particular; way too flippant for something we point newcomers to
> > when they ask for help.  +1 for rewriting in a more formal style.
>
> "Greg Sabino Mullane" <[email protected]> wrote:
> > Very inappropriate there: remove 'em!
>
> I took a shot at reworking the portion ahead of the TOC, but I know
> there are better wordsmiths than I out there.  If anyone wants to
> redo it, I won't be offended.
>
> I have a feeling the "Why were you sent this link?" section is a
> little harsh, too; but haven't taken a run at that yet.
>
>
Reworded it. Now looking at the rest of the document.

-selena


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