On Tue, Oct 12, 2021 at 4:00 PM Masahiko Sawada <sawada.m...@gmail.com> wrote:
>
> I've attached updated patches.
>

A couple more comments for some issues that I noticed in the v16 patches:

v16-0002

doc/src/sgml/ref/alter_subscription.sgml

(1) Order of parameters that can be reset doesn't match those that can be set.
Also, it doesn't match the order specified in the documentation
updates in the v16-0003 patch.

Suggested change:

BEFORE:
+       The parameters that can be reset are: <literal>streaming</literal>,
+       <literal>binary</literal>, <literal>synchronous_commit</literal>.
AFTER:
+       The parameters that can be reset are:
<literal>synchronous_commit</literal>,
+       <literal>binary</literal>, <literal>streaming</literal>.


v16-0003

doc/src/sgml/ref/alter_subscription.sgml

(1) Documentation update says "slot_name" is a parameter that can be
reset, but this is not correct, it can't be reset.
Also, the doc update is missing "the" before "parameter".

Suggested change:

BEFORE:
+      The parameters that can be reset are: <literal>slot_name</literal>,
+      <literal>synchronous_commit</literal>, <literal>binary</literal>,
+      <literal>streaming</literal>, and following parameter:
AFTER:
+      The parameters that can be reset are:
<literal>synchronous_commit</literal>,
+      <literal>binary</literal>, <literal>streaming</literal>, and
the following
+      parameter:


Regards,
Greg Nancarrow
Fujitsu Australia


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