>>>Hmm.  Outside the title that had better use upper-case characters for
>>>the first letter of each word, I can see references to the pattern you
>>>are trying to eliminate in amcheck.sgml (1), config.sgml (3),
>>>protocol.sgml (3) and mvcc.sgml (1).  Shouldn't you refresh these as
>>>well if the point is to make the full set of docs consistent?

>>>As of the full tree, I can see that:
>>>
>>$ git grep "hot standby" | wc -l
>>259

>>$ git grep "Hot Standby" | wc -l
>>73

>>>So there is a trend for one of the two.

>>Thanks for looking at it. Yes, I am aware there are other places which would 
>>need to be changed and I think I mentioned that in an >>earlier Email. Are 
>>you suggesting to change all at once? I wanted to start with the 
>>documentation and then continue with the other >>places.

>Attached a new version which also modifies amcheck.sgml, config.sgml, 
>protocol.sgml, and mvcc.sgml accordingly.

Regards
Daniel


From: Daniel Westermann (DWE) <daniel.westerm...@dbi-services.com>
Sent: Wednesday, March 9, 2022 15:15
To: Michael Paquier <mich...@paquier.xyz>
Cc: Robert Treat <r...@xzilla.net>; Kyotaro Horiguchi 
<horikyota....@gmail.com>; aleksan...@timescale.com <aleksan...@timescale.com>; 
pgsql-hackers@lists.postgresql.org <pgsql-hackers@lists.postgresql.org>
Subject: Re: Changing "Hot Standby" to "hot standby" 
 
>>Hmm.  Outside the title that had better use upper-case characters for
>>the first letter of each word, I can see references to the pattern you
>>are trying to eliminate in amcheck.sgml (1), config.sgml (3),
>>protocol.sgml (3) and mvcc.sgml (1).  Shouldn't you refresh these as
>>well if the point is to make the full set of docs consistent?

>>As of the full tree, I can see that:
>>
>>$ git grep "hot standby" | wc -l
>>259

>>$ git grep "Hot Standby" | wc -l
>>73

>>So there is a trend for one of the two.

>>Thanks for looking at it. Yes, I am aware there are other places which would 
>>need to be changed and I think I mentioned that in an >>earlier Email. Are 
>>you suggesting to change all at once? I wanted to start with the 
>>documentation and then continue with the other >>places.

>Attached a new version which also modifies amcheck.sgml, config.sgml, 
>protocol.sgml, and mvcc.sgml accordingly.

Sending this again as my last two mails did not seem to reach the archives or 
the commitfest. Or do they need moderation somehow?

Regards
Daniel
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/amcheck.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/amcheck.sgml
index 11d1eb5af2..5d61a33936 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/amcheck.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/amcheck.sgml
@@ -174,7 +174,7 @@ ORDER BY c.relpages DESC LIMIT 10;
       hypothetically, undiscovered bugs in the underlying B-Tree index
       access method code.  Note that
       <function>bt_index_parent_check</function> cannot be used when
-      Hot Standby mode is enabled (i.e., on read-only physical
+      hot standby mode is enabled (i.e., on read-only physical
       replicas), unlike <function>bt_index_check</function>.
      </para>
     </listitem>
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/config.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/config.sgml
index 7ed8c82a9d..e2db2a789f 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/config.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/config.sgml
@@ -4550,7 +4550,7 @@ ANY <replaceable class="parameter">num_sync</replaceable> ( <replaceable class="
       </term>
       <listitem>
        <para>
-        When Hot Standby is active, this parameter determines how long the
+        When hot standby is active, this parameter determines how long the
         standby server should wait before canceling standby queries that
         conflict with about-to-be-applied WAL entries, as described in
         <xref linkend="hot-standby-conflict"/>.
@@ -4582,7 +4582,7 @@ ANY <replaceable class="parameter">num_sync</replaceable> ( <replaceable class="
       </term>
       <listitem>
        <para>
-        When Hot Standby is active, this parameter determines how long the
+        When hot standby is active, this parameter determines how long the
         standby server should wait before canceling standby queries that
         conflict with about-to-be-applied WAL entries, as described in
         <xref linkend="hot-standby-conflict"/>.
@@ -10887,7 +10887,7 @@ dynamic_library_path = 'C:\tools\postgresql;H:\my_project\lib;$libdir'
         Enables logging of recovery-related debugging output that otherwise
         would not be logged. This parameter allows the user to override the
         normal setting of <xref linkend="guc-log-min-messages"/>, but only for
-        specific messages. This is intended for use in debugging Hot Standby.
+        specific messages. This is intended for use in debugging hot standby.
         Valid values are <literal>DEBUG5</literal>, <literal>DEBUG4</literal>,
         <literal>DEBUG3</literal>, <literal>DEBUG2</literal>, <literal>DEBUG1</literal>, and
         <literal>LOG</literal>.  The default, <literal>LOG</literal>, does not affect
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/high-availability.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/high-availability.sgml
index b5b6042104..81fa26f985 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/high-availability.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/high-availability.sgml
@@ -548,8 +548,8 @@ protocol to make nodes agree on a serializable transactional order.
    rollforward will take considerably longer, so that technique only
    offers a solution for disaster recovery, not high availability.
    A standby server can also be used for read-only queries, in which case
-   it is called a Hot Standby server. See <xref linkend="hot-standby"/> for
-   more information.
+   it is called a <firstterm>hot standby</firstterm> server. See 
+   <xref linkend="hot-standby"/> for more information.
   </para>
 
   <indexterm zone="high-availability">
@@ -1032,7 +1032,7 @@ primary_slot_name = 'node_a_slot'
    </para>
 
    <para>
-    Hot Standby feedback propagates upstream, whatever the cascaded arrangement.
+    Hot standby feedback propagates upstream, whatever the cascaded arrangement.
    </para>
 
    <para>
@@ -1499,16 +1499,16 @@ synchronous_standby_names = 'ANY 2 (s1, s2, s3)'
   <title>Hot Standby</title>
 
   <indexterm zone="high-availability">
-   <primary>Hot Standby</primary>
+   <primary>hot standby</primary>
   </indexterm>
 
    <para>
-    Hot Standby is the term used to describe the ability to connect to
+    Hot standby is the term used to describe the ability to connect to
     the server and run read-only queries while the server is in archive
     recovery or standby mode. This
     is useful both for replication purposes and for restoring a backup
     to a desired state with great precision.
-    The term Hot Standby also refers to the ability of the server to move
+    The term hot standby also refers to the ability of the server to move
     from recovery through to normal operation while users continue running
     queries and/or keep their connections open.
    </para>
@@ -1623,7 +1623,7 @@ synchronous_standby_names = 'ANY 2 (s1, s2, s3)'
        being executed during recovery.  This restriction applies even to
        temporary tables, because table rows cannot be read or written without
        assigning a transaction ID, which is currently not possible in a
-       Hot Standby environment.
+       hot standby environment.
       </para>
      </listitem>
      <listitem>
@@ -1703,7 +1703,7 @@ synchronous_standby_names = 'ANY 2 (s1, s2, s3)'
    <para>
     In normal operation, <quote>read-only</quote> transactions are allowed to
     use <command>LISTEN</command> and <command>NOTIFY</command>,
-    so Hot Standby sessions operate under slightly tighter
+    so hot standby sessions operate under slightly tighter
     restrictions than ordinary read-only sessions.  It is possible that some
     of these restrictions might be loosened in a future release.
    </para>
@@ -1746,7 +1746,7 @@ synchronous_standby_names = 'ANY 2 (s1, s2, s3)'
    </para>
 
    <para>
-    There are also additional types of conflict that can occur with Hot Standby.
+    There are also additional types of conflict that can occur with hot standby.
     These conflicts are <emphasis>hard conflicts</emphasis> in the sense that queries
     might need to be canceled and, in some cases, sessions disconnected to resolve them.
     The user is provided with several ways to handle these
@@ -1947,8 +1947,8 @@ synchronous_standby_names = 'ANY 2 (s1, s2, s3)'
     If <varname>hot_standby</varname> is <literal>on</literal> in <filename>postgresql.conf</filename>
     (the default value) and there is a
     <link linkend="file-standby-signal"><filename>standby.signal</filename></link><indexterm><primary>standby.signal</primary><secondary>for hot standby</secondary></indexterm>
-    file present, the server will run in Hot Standby mode.
-    However, it may take some time for Hot Standby connections to be allowed,
+    file present, the server will run in hot standby mode.
+    However, it may take some time for hot standby connections to be allowed,
     because the server will not accept connections until it has completed
     sufficient recovery to provide a consistent state against which queries
     can run.  During this period,
@@ -2282,7 +2282,7 @@ HINT:  You can then restart the server after making the necessary configuration
    <title>Caveats</title>
 
    <para>
-    There are several limitations of Hot Standby.
+    There are several limitations of hot standby.
     These can and probably will be fixed in future releases:
 
   <itemizedlist>
@@ -2299,7 +2299,7 @@ HINT:  You can then restart the server after making the necessary configuration
     <para>
      Valid starting points for standby queries are generated at each
      checkpoint on the primary. If the standby is shut down while the primary
-     is in a shutdown state, it might not be possible to re-enter Hot Standby
+     is in a shutdown state, it might not be possible to re-enter hot standby
      until the primary is started up, so that it generates further starting
      points in the WAL logs.  This situation isn't a problem in the most
      common situations where it might happen. Generally, if the primary is
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/mvcc.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/mvcc.sgml
index 6c94f6a942..da07f3f6c6 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/mvcc.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/mvcc.sgml
@@ -1741,7 +1741,7 @@ SELECT pg_advisory_lock(q.id) FROM
 
    <para>
     Support for the Serializable transaction isolation level has not yet
-    been added to Hot Standby replication targets (described in
+    been added to hot standby replication targets (described in
     <xref linkend="hot-standby"/>).  The strictest isolation level currently
     supported in hot standby mode is Repeatable Read.  While performing all
     permanent database writes within Serializable transactions on the
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/protocol.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/protocol.sgml
index 0695bcd423..9178c779ba 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/protocol.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/protocol.sgml
@@ -2417,7 +2417,7 @@ The commands accepted in replication mode are:
       <variablelist>
       <varlistentry id="protocol-replication-hot-standby-feedback-message">
       <term>
-          Hot Standby feedback message (F)
+          Hot standby feedback message (F)
       </term>
       <listitem>
       <para>
@@ -2428,7 +2428,7 @@ The commands accepted in replication mode are:
       </term>
       <listitem>
       <para>
-          Identifies the message as a Hot Standby feedback message.
+          Identifies the message as a hot standby feedback message.
       </para>
       </listitem>
       </varlistentry>
@@ -2451,7 +2451,7 @@ The commands accepted in replication mode are:
       <para>
           The standby's current global xmin, excluding the catalog_xmin from any
           replication slots. If both this value and the following
-          catalog_xmin are 0 this is treated as a notification that Hot Standby
+          catalog_xmin are 0 this is treated as a notification that hot standby
           feedback will no longer be sent on this connection. Later non-zero
           messages may reinitiate the feedback mechanism.
       </para>

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