On Mon, May 09, 2022 at 11:37:35AM -0400, Jonathan S. Katz wrote: > @@ -473,27 +473,25 @@ OPTIONS (ADD password_required 'false'); > <term><literal>parallel_commit</literal> (<type>boolean</type>)</term> > <listitem> > <para> > - This option controls whether <filename>postgres_fdw</filename> commits > - remote (sub)transactions opened on a foreign server in a local > - (sub)transaction in parallel when the local (sub)transaction commits. > - This option can only be specified for foreign servers, not per-table. > - The default is <literal>false</literal>. > + This option controls whether <filename>postgres_fdw</filename> > commits in > + parallel remote transactions opened on a foreign server in a local > + transaction when the local transaction is committed. This setting > + applies to remote and local substransactions. This option can only be
typo: substransactions > - If multiple foreign servers with this option enabled are involved in > - a local (sub)transaction, multiple remote (sub)transactions opened on > - those foreign servers in the local (sub)transaction are committed in > - parallel across those foreign servers when the local (sub)transaction > - commits. > + If multiple foreign servers with this option enabled have a local > + transaction, multiple remote transactions on those foreign servers are > + committed in parallel across those foreign servers when the local > + transaction is committed. > </para> I think "have a transaction" doesn't sound good, and the old language "involved in" was better.
