In writing the PG 16 release notes, I came upon an oddity in our new createuser syntax, specifically --role and --member. It turns out that --role matches CREATE ROLE ... ROLE IN (and has prior to PG 16) while the new --member option matches CREATE ROLE ... ROLE. The PG 16 feature discussion thread is here:
https://www.postgresql.org/message-id/flat/69a9851035cf0f0477bcc5d742b031a3%40oss.nttdata.com This seems like it will be forever confusing to people. I frankly don't know why --role matching CREATE ROLE ... ROLE IN was not already confusing in pre-PG 16. Any new ideas for improvement? At a minium I would like to apply the attached doc patch to PG 16 to improve awkward wording in CREATE ROLE and createuser. -- Bruce Momjian <br...@momjian.us> https://momjian.us EDB https://enterprisedb.com Embrace your flaws. They make you human, rather than perfect, which you will never be.
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/ref/create_role.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/ref/create_role.sgml index 4a84461b28..69ea9060bf 100644 --- a/doc/src/sgml/ref/create_role.sgml +++ b/doc/src/sgml/ref/create_role.sgml @@ -285,10 +285,11 @@ in sync when changing the above synopsis! <term><literal>IN ROLE</literal> <replaceable class="parameter">role_name</replaceable></term> <listitem> <para> - The <literal>IN ROLE</literal> clause lists one or more existing - roles to which the new role will be immediately added as a new - member. (Note that there is no option to add the new role as an - administrator; use a separate <command>GRANT</command> command to do that.) + The <literal>IN ROLE</literal> clause causes the new role to + be automatically added as a member of the specified existing + roles. (Note that there is no option to add the new role as an + administrator; use a separate <command>GRANT</command> command + to do that.) </para> </listitem> </varlistentry> @@ -306,9 +307,9 @@ in sync when changing the above synopsis! <term><literal>ROLE</literal> <replaceable class="parameter">role_name</replaceable></term> <listitem> <para> - The <literal>ROLE</literal> clause lists one or more existing - roles which are automatically added as members of the new role. - (This in effect makes the new role a <quote>group</quote>.) + The <literal>ROLE</literal> clause causes one or more specified + existing roles to be automatically added as members of the new + role. (This in effect makes the new role a <quote>group</quote>.) </para> </listitem> </varlistentry> diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/ref/createuser.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/ref/createuser.sgml index c5c74b86a2..58ed111642 100644 --- a/doc/src/sgml/ref/createuser.sgml +++ b/doc/src/sgml/ref/createuser.sgml @@ -85,11 +85,10 @@ PostgreSQL documentation <term><option>--admin=<replaceable class="parameter">role</replaceable></option></term> <listitem> <para> - Indicates a role that will be immediately added as a member of the new + Indicates an existing role that will be automatically added as a member of the new role with admin option, giving it the right to grant membership in the - new role to others. Multiple roles to add as members (with admin - option) of the new role can be specified by writing multiple - <option>-a</option> switches. + new role to others. Multiple existing roles can be specified by + writing multiple <option>-a</option> switches. </para> </listitem> </varlistentry> @@ -153,11 +152,10 @@ PostgreSQL documentation <term><option>--role=<replaceable class="parameter">role</replaceable></option></term> <listitem> <para> - Indicates a role to which this role will be added immediately as a new - member. Multiple roles to which this role will be added as a member - can be specified by writing multiple - <option>-g</option> switches. - </para> + Indicates the new role should be automatically added as a member + of the specified existing role. Multiple existing roles can be + specified by writing multiple <option>-g</option> switches. + </para> </listitem> </varlistentry> @@ -227,9 +225,9 @@ PostgreSQL documentation <term><option>--member=<replaceable class="parameter">role</replaceable></option></term> <listitem> <para> - Indicates role that will be immediately added as a member of the new - role. Multiple roles to add as members of the new role can be specified - by writing multiple <option>-m</option> switches. + Indicates the specified existing role should be automatically + added as a member of the new role. Multiple existing roles can + be specified by writing multiple <option>-m</option> switches. </para> </listitem> </varlistentry>