Hi. Here are a couple of minor comments.

1.
+        The time slot synchronization (see <xref
+        linkend="logicaldecoding-replication-slots-synchronization"/>)
+        was most recently stopped.

/The time slot/The time when slot/

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2.
- /* The time since the slot has become inactive */
+ /* The time slot sychronized was stopped. */


Maybe just make this comment the same as the sentence used in the docs:
- e.g. add "when"; fix, typo "sychronized", etc.


/The time slot sychronized was stopped./The time when slot
synchronization was most recently stopped./

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Kind Regards,
Peter Smith.
Fujitsu Australia


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