Hi Hou-San, here are a few trivial comments remaining for patch v6-0001.

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General.

1.
There are multiple comments in this patch mentioning 'wal' which
probably should say 'WAL' (uppercase).

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2.
There are multiple comments in this patch missing periods (.)

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doc/src/sgml/protocol.sgml

3.
+        <term>Primary status update (B)</term>
+        <listitem>
+         <variablelist>
+          <varlistentry>
+           <term>Byte1('s')</term>

Currently, there are identifiers 's' for the "Primary status update"
message, and 'S' for the "Primary status request" message.

As mentioned in the previous review ([1] #5b) I preferred it to be the
other way around:
'S' = status from primary
's' = request status from primary

Of course, it doesn't make any difference, but "S" seems more
important than "s", so therefore "S" being the main msg and coming
from the *primary* seemed more natural to me.

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4.
+       <varlistentry id="protocol-replication-standby-wal-status-request">
+        <term>Primary status request (F)</term>

Is it better to call this slightly differently to emphasise this is
only the request?

/Primary status request/Request primary status update/

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src/backend/replication/logical/worker.c

5.
+ * Retaining the dead tuples for this period is sufficient for ensuring
+ * eventual consistency using last-update-wins strategy, as dead tuples are
+ * useful for detecting conflicts only during the application of concurrent

As mentioned in review [1] #9, this is still called "last-update-wins
strategy" here in the comment, but was called the "last update win
strategy" strategy in the commit message. Those terms should be the
same -- e.g. the 'last-update-wins' strategy.

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[1] 
https://www.postgresql.org/message-id/CAHut%2BPs3sgXh2%3DrHDaqjU%3Dp28CK5rCgCLJZgPByc6Tr7_P2imw%40mail.gmail.com

Kind Regards,
Peter Smith.
Fujitsu Australia


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