> Agreed. v7 attached: three paragraphs collapsed into one, close to your > wording. I kept three bits from v6:
Only nit I have is: which <literal>standby_replay</literal> waits for and the + other standby modes ultimately depend on. The "ultimately depends on" is not very clear. I would change it to: "which <literal>standby_replay</literal> waits for, and could also delay waits in the other standby modes." -- Sami Imseih Amazon Web Services (AWS)
