On Wed, Jan 15, 2020 at 02:11:10PM -0300, Alvaro Herrera wrote:
> I just pushed this after some small extra tweaks.
>
> Thanks, Yamada-san, for seeing this to completion!
Find attached minor fixes to docs - sorry I didn't look earlier.
Possibly you'd also want to change the other existing instances of "preparing
to begin".
>From de108e69b5d33c881074b0a04697d7061684f823 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Justin Pryzby <pryz...@telsasoft.com>
Date: Wed, 15 Jan 2020 23:10:29 -0600
Subject: [PATCH v1] Doc review for ANALYZE progress (a166d408)
---
doc/src/sgml/monitoring.sgml | 10 +++++-----
1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/monitoring.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/monitoring.sgml
index 8b44fb1..10871b7 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/monitoring.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/monitoring.sgml
@@ -3525,7 +3525,7 @@ SELECT pg_stat_get_backend_pid(s.backendid) AS pid,
<para>
Whenever <command>ANALYZE</command> is running, the
<structname>pg_stat_progress_analyze</structname> view will contain a
- row for each backend that is currently running that command. The tables
+ row for each backend currently running <command>ANALYZE</command>. The tables
below describe the information that will be reported and provide
information about how to interpret it.
</para>
@@ -3635,7 +3635,7 @@ SELECT pg_stat_get_backend_pid(s.backendid) AS pid,
<row>
<entry><literal>initializing</literal></entry>
<entry>
- The command is preparing to begin scanning the heap. This phase is
+ The command is preparing to scan the heap. This phase is
expected to be very brief.
</entry>
</row>
@@ -3643,7 +3643,7 @@ SELECT pg_stat_get_backend_pid(s.backendid) AS pid,
<entry><literal>acquiring sample rows</literal></entry>
<entry>
The command is currently scanning the table given by
- <structfield>current_relid</structfield> to obtain sample rows.
+ <structfield>relid</structfield> to obtain sample rows.
</entry>
</row>
<row>
@@ -3659,14 +3659,14 @@ SELECT pg_stat_get_backend_pid(s.backendid) AS pid,
<row>
<entry><literal>computing statistics</literal></entry>
<entry>
- The command is computing statistics from the samples rows obtained during
+ The command is computing statistics from the sample rows obtained during
the table scan.
</entry>
</row>
<row>
<entry><literal>computing extended statistics</literal></entry>
<entry>
- The command is computing extended statistics from the samples rows obtained
+ The command is computing extended statistics from the sample rows obtained
durring the table scan.
</entry>
</row>
--
2.7.4
