Thanks for these corrections -- I applied them and a few minor changes from myself, and pushed. Another set of eyes over the result would be most welcome.
I hope we can close this now :-) -- Álvaro Herrera 39°49'30"S 73°17'W "Those who use electric razors are infidels destined to burn in hell while we drink from rivers of beer, download free vids and mingle with naked well shaved babes." (http://slashdot.org/comments.pl?sid=44793&cid=4647152)
