Hi,

As long as I'm sending in trivial fixes
to the docs here's a bit of wording that's been bugging me.

In a number of places the docs read "only relevant",
this patch reverses this to read "relevant only".

I believe this reads better because it quickly
answers the question "is what?" with "is relevant",
making the sentence less of a strain to read.
"Only relevant" would be better if you really wanted
to emphasize the "only", which I don't think is called
for.

(Sending in such trivial patches makes me feel like
I'm bikeshedding.  Feel free to ignore them without comment.)

Regards,

Karl <k...@meme.com>
Free Software:  "You don't pay back, you pay forward."
                 -- Robert A. Heinlein

diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/datatype.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/datatype.sgml
index 71cf59e..02763b5 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/datatype.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/datatype.sgml
@@ -3596,7 +3596,7 @@ SELECT person.name, holidays.num_weeks FROM person, holidays
      as the canonical form for MAC addresses, and specifies the first
      form (with colons) as the bit-reversed notation, so that
      08-00-2b-01-02-03 = 01:00:4D:08:04:0C.  This convention is widely
-     ignored nowadays, and it is only relevant for obsolete network
+     ignored nowadays, and it is relevant only for obsolete network
      protocols (such as Token Ring).  PostgreSQL makes no provisions
      for bit reversal, and all accepted formats use the canonical LSB
      order.
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/ref/pg_dump.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/ref/pg_dump.sgml
index 4503830..b19f15e 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/ref/pg_dump.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/ref/pg_dump.sgml
@@ -427,7 +427,7 @@ PostgreSQL documentation
       <listitem>
        <para>
         Specify the superuser user name to use when disabling triggers.
-        This is only relevant if <option>--disable-triggers</> is used.
+        This is relevant only if <option>--disable-triggers</> is used.
         (Usually, it's better to leave this out, and instead start the
         resulting script as superuser.)
        </para>
@@ -602,7 +602,7 @@ PostgreSQL documentation
       <term><option>--disable-triggers</></term>
       <listitem>
        <para>
-        This option is only relevant when creating a data-only dump.
+        This option is relevant only when creating a data-only dump.
         It instructs <application>pg_dump</application> to include commands
         to temporarily disable triggers on the target tables while
         the data is reloaded.  Use this if you have referential
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/ref/pg_dumpall.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/ref/pg_dumpall.sgml
index 7c49c03..253ee01 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/ref/pg_dumpall.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/ref/pg_dumpall.sgml
@@ -190,7 +190,7 @@ PostgreSQL documentation
       <listitem>
        <para>
         Specify the superuser user name to use when disabling triggers.
-        This is only relevant if <option>--disable-triggers</> is used.
+        This is relevant only if <option>--disable-triggers</> is used.
         (Usually, it's better to leave this out, and instead start the
         resulting script as superuser.)
        </para>
@@ -283,7 +283,7 @@ PostgreSQL documentation
       <term><option>--disable-triggers</></term>
       <listitem>
        <para>
-        This option is only relevant when creating a data-only dump.
+        This option is relevant only when creating a data-only dump.
         It instructs <application>pg_dumpall</application> to include commands
         to temporarily disable triggers on the target tables while
         the data is reloaded.  Use this if you have referential
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/ref/pg_restore.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/ref/pg_restore.sgml
index b276da6..2993369 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/ref/pg_restore.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/ref/pg_restore.sgml
@@ -383,7 +383,7 @@
       <listitem>
        <para>
         Specify the superuser user name to use when disabling triggers.
-        This is only relevant if <option>--disable-triggers</> is used.
+        This is relevant only if <option>--disable-triggers</> is used.
        </para>
       </listitem>
      </varlistentry>
@@ -458,7 +458,7 @@
       <term><option>--disable-triggers</></term>
       <listitem>
        <para>
-        This option is only relevant when performing a data-only restore.
+        This option is relevant only when performing a data-only restore.
         It instructs <application>pg_restore</application> to execute commands
         to temporarily disable triggers on the target tables while
         the data is reloaded.  Use this if you have referential

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