Neil Conway <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> writes:
> I've applied the attached patch to CVS HEAD. It improves the 
> postmaster reference page, the locale / character set docs, adds some 
> more cross-references to the locale / character set docs, and makes a 
> few minor fixes elsewhere. Any suggestions for future improvement are 
> welcome.

Looks good ... one trivial quibble:

> !         This option is equivalent to setting <literal>listen_addresses</> in
> !         <filename>postgresql.conf</>.
> --- 171,185 ----
> !         Specifying this option is equivalent to setting the <xref
> !         linkend="guc-listen-addresses">.

"... setting the listen_addresses" seems a bit too brief to me; in a
medium that doesn't mark up the crossref at all, it'd seem disconnected.
I'd have written at least "the <xref linkend="guc-listen-addresses">
configuration parameter".

Just MHO though, others might see it differently.

                        regards, tom lane

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