I meant things like [2] which could be embedded directly.
Also, [4] is something that you can link to.
The 'Ideas for research' could all be links as well.
I cannot find [1] in the text itself.
You could also add some (relevant or just nice) pictures.

> On 15 Mar 2015, at 17:00, Sean P. DeNigris <[email protected]> wrote:
> 
> Thanks for the feedback! Could you be more specific? For example, I clicked 
> the links and they seem to work...
> 
> On Mar 15, 2015, at 5:54 AM, "Sven Van Caekenberghe-2 [via Smalltalk]" 
> <[hidden email]> wrote:
> 
>> Sean, 
>> 
>> The article is very good, but it could use some editing/cleanup. Have a look 
>> at what is possible in https://medium.com/concerning-pharo. You should at 
>> least make the links work. 
>> 
>> Sven 
>> 
>> > On 15 Mar 2015, at 02:57, Sean P. DeNigris <<a 
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>> > philippeback wrote 
>> >> Because Sven articles are there already. 
>> > 
>> > Ah, okay :) I also posted to my blog and shared on reddit 
>> > http://redd.it/2z2ysg and HN https://news.ycombinator.com/item?id=9205061
>> > 
>> > 
>> > 
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