I made a slew of minor edits. Here were some impressions that I didn't have enough information to fix:
Announcements @ http://book.pharo-project.org/book/announcements * I'd like to see a short explanation of the trade-offs involved in announcements vs. simple message sends. The page speaks vaguely to this, but I think it would be very valuable to have a "Smalltalk Best Practice Patterns"-style description of the pros and cons of each so people can make informed decisions in their projects. Fixing underscores @ http://book.pharo-project.org/book/TipsAndTricks/FixingUnderscores * I wasn't sure whether this was an instruction, a suggestion, or merely an option. Is this necessary? personal preference? Again, some background would help. List of Plugins @ http://book.pharo-project.org/book/Virtual-Machine/VMPlugins/VMPluginsList * "GeniePlugin : This plugin implements the functionality of" ??? * "SurfacePlugin : This plugin is a fake" uh, what, lol Traits @ http://book.pharo-project.org/book/Traits: * This one I found very tough. Especially the initial part of the BulletinBoard example. I wasn't sure how I would play with the example in my own image. For instance, what should the subclass of BulletinBoard be? * "BoardListener new listenAndReact makes sure that each time the method announceNewAddedItem is executed on the created bulletinBoard, the event is received by the listener." Does it? It seems to just write to the Transcript, and not be connected to the listener at all. * "Open an inspector on the expression above" - which expression? * "! Going deeper When applying a trait to a class it may face different situations." * "!!Using Alias to access a hidden method" This section (the beginning anyway), seemed to describe something different than the title here. It's great to have a resource like this - let's squeeze all the juice out of it. Sean -- View this message in context: http://n4.nabble.com/Help-on-collaborator-Active-book-tp2014707p2015363.html Sent from the Pharo Smalltalk mailing list archive at Nabble.com. _______________________________________________ Pharo-project mailing list [email protected] http://lists.gforge.inria.fr/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/pharo-project
