On Apr 19, 2012, at 4:44 PM, Sean P. DeNigris wrote: > > Marcus Denker-4 wrote >> >> We need an announce mail / new ticker entry. Any quick improvements / typo >> fixes? >> > > Awesome job!!! Wow, so many changes. I've been using FS in 1.3 and that > alone would be *huge* >
Sorry, too late... > A few fixes: > * "release of 1.4 of Pharo" sounds weird; I'd say "release of Pharo version > 1.4" > * "Read the new forth coming book" -> "Reading the new forthcoming book" > - should be "reading", like the other bullets > - forthcoming is one word > * "Read the Pharo vision document" -> "Reading the Pharo vision document" > - should be "reading", like the other bullets > * "Now you got the feel of the effort" -> "Now you've got the feel of the > effort" > * "in particular for the salary of Igor Stasenko" -> "especially for the > salary of Igor Stasenko" > - the phrase "in particular was used twice in that line > * "and for help in the infrastructure put in place" -> "and for helping to > put the infrastructure in place" > * "No event pulling anymore"... should be polling? > * "and a lot a lot and a lot more" -> "and a lot, lot more" As exciting as > this is, two "lot"s is probably enough :) > * "MC handles better dependencies" -> "MC handles dependencies better" > * "New version of OCompletion... duplication." Remove period like other > bullets > * "MultiSelection improvements" & "Drag and drop in multi selection list" -> > "Multi-selection improvements" & "Drag and drop in multi-selection list" > (write "multi-selection" uniformly) > * "Merged NewParagraph and MultiNewParagraph" Remove extra space after > "NewParagraph" > * "LazyListMorph cleaning" Remove extra space > * "NewTextMorph and TextComposer improvements" Remove 2 extra spaces > * "Removing NewTextMorph and related" Remove extra space > * "Removed BlockContext , blue book old closure encodings" Remove spec > before comma > * "Speedup MethodDictionary #rehash" Remove extra space > * Remove "More class comments" from "Fixes" list. It's already listed under > "Changes" > > -- > View this message in context: > http://forum.world.st/DRAFT-Announce-mail-news-entry-tp4570244p4571103.html > Sent from the Pharo Smalltalk mailing list archive at Nabble.com. > -- Marcus Denker -- http://marcusdenker.de
