Commit:    6133ccf8650d034728e3732b3eb553476e5f4727
Author:    Peter Cowburn <sala...@php.net>         Wed, 20 Nov 2013 14:16:23 
+0000
Parents:   7be77963251c2844e39be5cf857379be13e106aa
Branches:  master

Link:       
http://git.php.net/?p=web/php.git;a=commitdiff;h=6133ccf8650d034728e3732b3eb553476e5f4727

Log:
minor grammar changes

Changed paths:
  M  archive/entries/2013-11-20-1.xml


Diff:
diff --git a/archive/entries/2013-11-20-1.xml b/archive/entries/2013-11-20-1.xml
index fe20ae0..0fd3023 100644
--- a/archive/entries/2013-11-20-1.xml
+++ b/archive/entries/2013-11-20-1.xml
@@ -3,27 +3,27 @@
   <title>Our modern web theme goes live!</title>
   <id>http://php.net/archive/2013.php#id2013-11-20-1</id>
   <published>2013-11-20T04:00:00-08:00</published>
-  <updated>2013-11-20T13:26:00-00:00</updated>
+  <updated>2013-11-20T13:32:00-00:00</updated>
   <category term="frontpage" label="PHP.net frontpage news"/>
   <link href="http://php.net/index.php#id2013-11-20-1"; rel="alternate" 
type="text/html"/>
   <link href="http://php.net/archive/2013.php#id2013-11-20-1"; rel="via" 
type="text/html"/>
   <content type="xhtml">
     <div xmlns="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml";>
-     <p>The PHP web team are delighted to announce the launch of the new web 
theme that's been 
+     <p>The PHP web team are delighted to announce the launch of the new web 
theme that has been
     in beta for many months. Lots of hard work has gone into this release and 
we will be continually 
-    improving things over time now that we've finally migrated away from the 
legacy theme.</p>
+    improving things over time now that we have migrated away from the legacy 
theme.</p>
 
     <p>From an aesthetics point of view the general color scheme of the 
website has been lightened from the
       older dark purple. Lots of borders and links use a similar purple color 
to attain
-      consistency. Fonts are smoother, colors contrast and highlighting has 
significantly improved; especially
+      consistency. Fonts are smoother, and colors, contrast and highlighting 
have significantly improved; especially
       on function reference pages. Code examples should now be much more 
readable.</p>
 
-     <p>The theme is marked up using HTML5 and generally much more modern. 
We're using googlefonts and
-      Twitter Bootstrap for our theme base.</p>
+     <p>The theme is marked up using HTML5 and is generally much more modern. 
We are using Google Fonts and
+      Bootstrap for our theme base.</p>
      
-     <p>For reporting website issues you can use the 'Feedback' widget on the 
side of the page (not visible 
-      on smartphones), or you can use the <a href="http://bugs.php.net"; 
title="PHP Bug Tracker">bugs.php.net</a>
-      tracker. Despite our extensive multi-device/multi-browser testing, we 
may have missed something. So if you
+     <p>To provide valuable feedback, you can use the 'Feedback' widget on the 
side of the page (not visible
+      on smartphones) and to report bugs, you can make use of the <a 
href="http://bugs.php.net"; title="PHP Bug Tracker">bugs.php.net</a>
+      tracker. Despite our extensive multi-device/multi-browser testing, we 
may have missed something. So, if you
       spot any issues please do get in touch.</p>
 
      <p>Special thanks to the guys who helped make this happen, you know who 
you are!</p>


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