Commit:    62a4b96aed1cd1c2a3ace6058bf9c96f9ad6e433
Author:    Sobak <msobaczew...@gmail.com>         Sun, 17 Aug 2014 20:58:54 
+0200
Parents:   91a0093392f588682580bf43293e9a2c062f440b
Branches:  master

Link:       
http://git.php.net/?p=web/php.git;a=commitdiff;h=62a4b96aed1cd1c2a3ace6058bf9c96f9ad6e433

Log:
Language improvements (thanks Peter!)

Changed paths:
  M  docs.php
  M  download-docs.php
  M  manual/php4.php


Diff:
diff --git a/docs.php b/docs.php
index 0be6988..9638b6e 100644
--- a/docs.php
+++ b/docs.php
@@ -29,10 +29,10 @@ site_header("Documentation", array("current" => "docs"));
 
  <div class="warning">
   <p>
-   Documentation for PHP 4 is currently being removed from the
+   Documentation for PHP 4 has been removed from the
    manual, but there is archived version still available. For
    more informations, please read <a href="/manual/php4.php">
-   this explanation</a>.
+   Documentation for PHP 4</a>.
   </p>
  </div>
 </div>
@@ -90,7 +90,7 @@ foreach ($ACTIVE_ONLINE_LANGUAGES as $langcode => $langname) {
   packages</a> can be found on a separate server.
  </li>
  <li>
-  If you are looking for PHP 4 documentation, plase read <a 
href="/manual/php4.php">
+  If you are looking for PHP 4 documentation, please read <a 
href="/manual/php4.php">
   this explanation</a>.
  </li>
  <li>
diff --git a/download-docs.php b/download-docs.php
index b8ecd7c..f0167b0 100644
--- a/download-docs.php
+++ b/download-docs.php
@@ -68,7 +68,7 @@ $formats = array(
   are not complete, and contain English parts. 
  </li>
  <li>
-  If you are looking for PHP 4 documentation, plase read
+  If you are looking for PHP 4 documentation, please read
   <a href="/manual/php4.php">this explanation</a>.
  </li>
 </ul>
diff --git a/manual/php4.php b/manual/php4.php
index 76664fe..c4d9ca3 100644
--- a/manual/php4.php
+++ b/manual/php4.php
@@ -10,20 +10,20 @@ site_header('PHP Version 4 Documentation');
 <p>
  The PHP 4 documentation was removed from the PHP Manual in August 2014,
  approximately six years after PHP 4 reached its end of life. However, we have
- provided downloadable copy of manual for anyone who would need it.
+ provided downloadable copies of the manual for anyone who would need it.
 </p>
 
 <h2>PHP 4 Manual</h2>
 <p>
- An attempt was made to preserve as many documentation related to PHP 4, as it 
is
- possible. Despite this, we don't have nice, separate manual covering only PHP 
4.
- The reason for this is how our documentation is structured. Even so, archived 
copy
- describes more ascpets of PHP 4 than actual manual described in August 2014 
(e.g.
+ An attempt has been made to preserve as much documentation related to PHP 4, 
as
+ possible. Despite this, we don't have a nice, separate manual covering only 
PHP 4.
+ The reason for this is how our documentation is structured. Even so, the 
archived copy
+ describes more aspects of PHP 4 than actual manual described in August 2014 
(e.g.
  it covers more PHP 4 extensions).
 </p>
 
 <p>
- To download copy of the manual for PHP 4, see the <a 
href="http://doc.php.net/archives/";>
+ To download a copy of the manual for PHP 4, see the <a 
href="http://doc.php.net/archives/";>
  documentation archives</a>. Please, remember, that archived version 
<strong>should not
  </strong> be used in everyday development, unless you are developing PHP 4 
applications.
  This version lacks many topics connected with PHP 5 and it is not updated 
anymore.
@@ -32,9 +32,9 @@ site_header('PHP Version 4 Documentation');
 <h2>Migrating to PHP 5</h2>
 <p>
  All users are strongly encouraged to upgrade their environments to PHP 5.
- Please, read guide for <a 
href="http://php.net/manual/en/migration5.php";>Migrating
+ Please, read our guides for <a 
href="http://php.net/manual/en/migration5.php";>Migrating
  from PHP 4 to PHP 5.0.x</a> and <a 
href="http://php.net/manual/en/faq.migration5.php";>
- Migrating from PHP 4 to PHP 5 FAQ</a>, for more informations.
+ Migrating from PHP 4 to PHP 5 FAQ</a>, for more information.
 </p>
 
 <?php


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