Commit:    e345b9e63fa45a485637d983df9dc2edb7d539de
Author:    Roman Pronskiy <[email protected]>         Fri, 20 Nov 2020 16:37:41 
+0200
Committer: Sara Golemon <[email protected]>      Wed, 25 Nov 2020 20:28:13 +0000
Parents:   077378071826bad0ee19e23962858d240459d773
Branches:  master

Link:       
http://git.php.net/?p=web/php.git;a=commitdiff;h=e345b9e63fa45a485637d983df9dc2edb7d539de

Log:
Apply suggestions from code review

Co-authored-by: Gabriel Caruso <[email protected]>

Changed paths:
  M  releases/8_0_x.php


Diff:
diff --git a/releases/8_0_x.php b/releases/8_0_x.php
index c22dc257f..851d9e0f2 100644
--- a/releases/8_0_x.php
+++ b/releases/8_0_x.php
@@ -98,7 +98,7 @@ class User
       </div>
     </div>
     <div class="php8-compare__content">
-      <p>Instead of PHPDoc annotations, you can now use structured metadata 
with native PHP syntax.</p>
+      <p>Instead of PHPDoc annotations, you can now use structured metadata 
with PHP's native syntax.</p>
     </div>
   </div>
 
@@ -143,7 +143,7 @@ class User
       </div>
     </div>
     <div class="php8-compare__content">
-      <p>Less boilerplate code for defining and initializing properties.</p>
+      <p>Less boilerplate code to define and initialize properties.</p>
     </div>
   </div>
 
@@ -268,7 +268,7 @@ if ($session !== null) {
     </div>
     <div class="php8-compare__content">
       <p>Instead of null check conditions, you can now use a chain of calls 
with the new nullsafe operator. When the
-        evaluation of one element in the chain fails, the execution of the 
entire chain is aborted and the entire chain
+        evaluation of one element in the chain fails, the execution of the 
entire chain aborts and the entire chain
         evaluates to null.</p>
     </div>
   </div>
@@ -324,7 +324,7 @@ array_chunk([], -1); // ValueError: array_chunk(): Argument 
#2 ($length) must be
       </div>
     </div>
     <div class="php8-compare__content">
-      <p>Most of the internal functions now throw a Fatal Error exception if 
parameter validation fails.</p>
+      <p>Most of the internal functions now throw a Fatal Error exception if 
the validation of the parameters fails.</p>
     </div>
   </div>
 </section>
@@ -345,7 +345,7 @@ array_chunk([], -1); // ValueError: array_chunk(): Argument 
#2 ($length) must be
     <div class="php8-column">
       <ul>
         <li>
-          Allow trailing comma in parameter list <a 
href="https://wiki.php.net/rfc/trailing_comma_in_parameter_list";>RFC</a>
+          Allow a trailing comma in parameter lists <a 
href="https://wiki.php.net/rfc/trailing_comma_in_parameter_list";>RFC</a>
           and closure use lists <a 
href="https://wiki.php.net/rfc/trailing_comma_in_closure_use_list";>RFC</a>.
         </li>
         <li>
@@ -362,7 +362,7 @@ array_chunk([], -1); // ValueError: array_chunk(): Argument 
#2 ($length) must be
           Treat namespaced names as single token <a 
href="https://wiki.php.net/rfc/namespaced_names_as_token";>RFC</a>.
         </li>
         <li>
-          Throw expression <a 
href="https://wiki.php.net/rfc/throw_expression";>RFC</a>.
+          Throw is now an expression <a 
href="https://wiki.php.net/rfc/throw_expression";>RFC</a>.
         </li>
         <li>
           Allow ::class on objects <a 
href="https://wiki.php.net/rfc/class_name_literal_on_object";>RFC</a>.
@@ -400,7 +400,7 @@ array_chunk([], -1); // ValueError: array_chunk(): Argument 
#2 ($length) must be
           Mixed type <a href="https://wiki.php.net/rfc/mixed_type_v2";>RFC</a>.
         </li>
         <li>
-          Static return type <a href="">RFC</a>.
+          Static return type <a 
href="https://wiki.php.net/rfc/static_return_type";>RFC</a>.
         </li>
         <li>
           Types for internal functions


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