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 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="iso-8859-1"?>
-<!-- $Revision: 1.5 $ -->
+<!-- $Revision: 1.6 $ -->
 
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         offline), and using "http://anymirror.php.net/funcname";
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 <appendix id="moreabout">
- <title>More about this Manual</title>
+ <title>About the manual</title>
 
  <sect1 id="moreabout.formats">
-  <title>PHP Manual formats</title>
+  <title>Formats</title>
   <para>
-   We provide the PHP Manual in several formats. For first
-   glance, these formats can be devided into two groups,
-   online readable formats and downloadable packages.
-  </para>
-  <para>
-   You can read the Manual online at <ulink url="&url.php;">
-   &url.php;</ulink> and on the several mirror sites. We advise
-   you to choose one nearby mirror site, if you would like
-   to use this form of our Manual, as you can get better
-   speed. For the online Manual you can choose from two
-   layouts, so you always have the ability to view the printer
-   friendly version if you have a slow connection, or would
-   like to print out one page. The main advantage of these
-   online Manuals is that you can read the most actual manual
-   along the <link linkend="moreabout.notes">user notes</link>,
-   and you don't need to set up any software, as you only need
-   a web browser to see it. The major disadvantage is that you
-   need to always be online, you can face with server
-   availability problems, you can't do a full text search on
-   the manual, and there is no full index of manual pages.
-  </para>
-  <para>
-   If you decide to download the PHP Manual, you can choose
-   from many different formats we provide. What you choose
-   depends on your operating system, and your personal
-   reading style. If you are interested, how we can generate
-   these various formats, read on the technical part of this
-   appendix named <link linkend="moreabout.generate">How we
-   generate the formats</link>.
-  </para>
-  <para>
-   The HTML and text files may be the most crossplatform
-   format, as there is a text viewer and/or a browser
-   on all operating systems. We provide the HTML files
-   in several compressed formats for the different
-   operating systems. Using the all-on-one-page HTML
-   or text version is not ideal for day to day work,
-   although full text search is easy in such files.
-   Note, that the compressed file with several HTML
-   files contain more than 2000 files. You can serach in
-   these files using your OS search capabilities such as the
-   global search dialog on Windows or grep on unix like 
-   systems. Since it is not very comfortable using these tools,
-   avail yourself of the online search as often as needed.
-  </para>
-  <para>
-   PDF is also a popular cross platform format. This
-   is the best for printing, although we do not
-   recommend printing out the manual on the whole, as
-   it can take so much resources. As the manual
-   changes from day to day, think twice before
-   you print out the whole manual. Viewing PDF,
-   you have the full text search ability. Note, that
-   you need <ulink url="&url.adobe.acrobat;">Adobe
-   Acrobat Reader</ulink> to read the PDF files.
-  </para>
-  <para>
-   The PalmPilot DOC and iSilo formats are ideal
-   if you travel a lot and would like to learn
-   more from the manual while on road or in air.
-   You can bring your Palm with you, with the
-   <ulink url="&url.palm.doc;">DOC</ulink>
-   or <ulink url="&url.palm.isilo;">iSilo</ulink>
-   reader installed respectively for the format
-   you downloaded. This is not the best way to
-   learn PHP, but can be handy to get answers
-   quickly.
-  </para>
-  <para>
-   At last, but not least, we have a Windows
-   HTML Help version of the PHP Manual. It is
-   actually a spiced up HTML package. The biggest
-   advantage of the Compiled HTML (also known as 
-   <acronym>CHM</acronym>) version is that the viewer 
-   provides full text search, search in search results, 
-   full index, and bookmarking. This format also kindly 
-   integrates with many popular PHP IDEs on Windows.
-   The biggest disadvantage is that it is currently only
-   available on Windows operating systems. You also 
-   need the MS Internet Explorer 4.0 or newer to access the
-   CHM version, if you are on an older Windows system.
-   A Visual Basic for Linux project is under the planing
-   stage, which would include the development of a CHM
-   Creator and Viewer for Linux. See their
-   <ulink url="&url.vb4linux;">sourceforge
-   page</ulink>, if you are interested in the progress.
+   The PHP manual is provided in several formats. These formats can be divided
+   into two groups: online readable formats, and downloadable packages.
   </para>
+  <note>
+   <para>
+    Some publishers have made available printed versions of this manual. We
+    cannot recommend any of those, as they tend to become out-of-date very
+    quickly.
+   </para>
+  </note>
+  <para>
+   You can read the manual online at <ulink url="&url.php;"> &url.php;</ulink>
+   and on the numerous mirror sites. For best performance, you should choose
+   the mirror site closest to you. You can view the manual in either its plain
+   (print-friendly) HTML format or a an HTML format that integrates the manual
+   into the look and feel of the PHP website itself.
+  </para>
+  <para>
+   An advantage of the online manual over most of the offline formats is the
+   integration of <link linkend="moreabout.notes">user-contributed
+   notes</link>. An obvious disadvantage is that you have to be online to view
+   the manual in the online formats.
+  </para>
+  <para>
+   There are several offline formats of the manual, and the most appropriate
+   format for you depends on what operating system you use and your personal
+   reading style. For information on how the manual is generated in so many
+   formats, read the <link linkend="moreabout.generate">'How we generate the
+   formats'</link> section of this appendix.
+  </para>
+  <para>
+   The most cross-platform formats of the manual are the HTML and plain-text
+   versions. The HTML format is provided both as a single HTML file and as
+   a package of individual files for each section (which results in a
+   collection of several thousand files). The HTML and plaintext formats are
+   provided as compressed tar files (using both gzip and bzip2) and ZIP
+   archives.
+  </para>
+  <para>
+   Another popular cross-platform format, and the format most suited to
+   printing, is PDF (also known as Adobe Acrobat). But before you rush to
+   download this format and hit the Print button, be warned that the manual is
+   nearly 2000 pages long, and constantly being revised.
+  </para>
+  <note>
+   <para>
+    If you do not already have a program capable of viewing PDF format
+    files, you may need to download <ulink url="&url.adobe.acrobat;">Adobe
+    Acrobat Reader</ulink>.
+   </para>
+  </note>
+  <para>
+   For owners of Palm-compatible handhelds, the Palm document and iSilo
+   formats are ideal for this platform. You can bring your handheld with you
+   on your daily commute and use a <ulink url="&url.palm.doc;">DOC</ulink>
+   or <ulink url="&url.palm.isilo;">iSilo</ulink> reader to brush up on your
+   PHP knowledge, or just use it as a quick reference.
+  </para>
+  <para>
+   For Windows platforms, the Windows HTML Help version of the manual soups up
+   the HTML format for use with the Windows HTML Help application. This
+   version provides full-text search, a full index, and bookmarking. Many
+   popular Windows PHP development environments also integrate with this
+   version of the documentation to provide easy access.
+  </para>
+  <note>
+   <para>
+    A Visual Basic for Linux project is in the planning stage, which will
+    include the development of a CHM Creator and Viewer for Linux. See their
+    <ulink url="&url.vb4linux;">SourceForge.net page</ulink> if you are
+    interested in the progress.
+   </para>
+  </note>
  </sect1>
  
  <sect1 id="moreabout.notes">
   <title>About user notes</title>
   <para>
-   User notes are an important part while reading the
-   PHP Manual. Some user notes contain very valuable
-   information. We basically set up the user note system,
-   to let people add their own examples, warnings about
-   functions, language elements, etc.
-  </para>
-  <para>
-   Note, that the user notes are not moderated before
-   they appear on the PHP sites, so the quality of
-   content cannot be guaranteed.
-  </para>
-  <para>
-   If you can't find a solution for your problem in
-   the user notes, you may consider reading the
-   section <link linkend="moreabout.more">How to find
-   more information about PHP</link>.
-  </para>
+   The user-contributed notes play an important role in the development of
+   this manual. By allowing readers of the manual to contribute examples,
+   caveats, and further clarifications from their browser, we are able to
+   incorporate that feedback into the main text of the manual. And until the
+   notes have been incorporated, they can be viewed in their submitted form
+   online and in some of the offline formats.
+  </para>
+  <note>
+   <para>
+    The user-contributed notes are not moderated before they appear online, so
+    the quality of the writing or code examples, and even the veracity of the
+    contribution, cannot be guaranteed. (Not that there is any guarantee of
+    the quality or accuracy of the manual text itself.)
+   </para>
+  </note>
  </sect1>
  
  <sect1 id="moreabout.more">
   <title>How to find more information about PHP</title>
   <para>
-   This Manual is not intended to be a full programmers
-   quide. If you are completely a beginner in programming,
-   you might not get used to PHP by only reading the Manual.
-   You may consider buying a book with deeper explanation
-   on simple programming tasks. You can find a listing
-   of books at
-   <ulink url="&url.php.books;">&url.php.books;</ulink>.
-   We do not recommend you to buy a reprint of the PHP
-   Manual, because these are commonly quite outdated.
-   Consider that the PHP manual is changing from day
-   to day.
-  </para>
-  <para>
-   If you think someone already faced the exact problem and
-   you are stuggling, you can ask your questions on
-   one of our popular mailing lists. There are plenty
-   of them grouped by subject. You may receive an answer
-   for your question in minutes in the busiest hours.
-   You can subscribe to one mailing list at <ulink
-   url="&url.php.support;">&url.php.support;</ulink>.
-   You can also find IRC channels linked on this
-   page in the left bar.
-  </para>
-  <para>
-   If you are not fan of mail discussions, you can also
-   find many community sites listed on our links page at
-   <ulink url="&url.php.links;">&url.php.links;</ulink>.
+   This manual does not attempt to provide instruction about general
+   programming practices. If you are a first-time, or even just a beginning,
+   programmer, you may find it difficult to learn how to program in PHP using
+   just this manual. You may want to seek out a text more oriented towards
+   beginners. You can find a list of PHP-related books at <ulink
+   url="&url.php.books;">&url.php.books;</ulink>.
+  </para>
+  <para>
+   There are a number of active mailing lists for discussion of all aspects of
+   programming with PHP. If you find yourself stuck on a problem for which you
+   can't find your own solution, you may be able to get help from someone on
+   these lists. You can find a list of the mailing lists at <ulink
+   url="&url.php.support;">&url.php.support;</ulink>, as well as links to the
+   mailing list archives and other online support resources. Furthermore, at
+   <ulink url="&url.php.links;">&url.php.links;</ulink> there is a list of
+   websites devoted to PHP articles, forums, and code galleries.
   </para>
  </sect1>
 
  <sect1 id="moreabout.howtohelp">
   <title>How to help improve the documentation</title>
   <para>
-   Of course you can help to improve our documentation.
-   There are basically two ways of doing this.
+   There are two ways you can help to improve this documentation.
   </para>
   <para>
-   If you find any errors within this manual, in any language,
-   please report them using the bug system at:
-   <ulink url="&url.php.bugs;">&url.php.bugs;</ulink>.
-   Classify the bug as "Documentation Problem". This way
-   we can follow every bug and track the things done to
-   eliminate them from the documentation. You can also
-   submit format problems (eg. PHP Manual PDF displayed
-   incorrectly). Please don't abuse the bug system by submitting 
-   requests for help, use the mailing lists or community sites
-   mentioned above, instead.
-  </para>
-  <para>
-   By adding annotations to pages, you can provide more
-   examples to readers than any single manual writer.
-   Readers very much appreciate useable user comments.
-   Do not submit bug reports using the annotation system
-   please. Read more about annotations in the <link
-   linkend="moreabout.notes">About user notes</link> part.
+   If you find errors in this manual, in any language, please report them
+   using the bug system at <ulink url="&url.php.bugs;">&url.php.bugs;</ulink>.
+   Classify the bug as "Documentation Problem". You can also submit problems
+   related to specific manual formats here.
+  </para>
+  <note>
+   <para>
+    Please don't abuse the bug system by submitting requests for help. Use the
+    mailing lists or community sites mentioned earlier, instead.
+   </para>
+  </note>
+  <para>
+   By contributing notes, you can provide additional examples, caveats, and
+   clarifications for other readers. But do not submit bug reports using the
+   annotation system please. You can read more about annotations in the <link
+   linkend="moreabout.notes">'About user notes'</link> section of this
+   appendix.
   </para>
  </sect1>
  
@@ -201,7 +172,7 @@
   <para>
    Using <acronym>XML</acronym> as a source format gives us
    the ability to generate many output formats from the source
-   files, only maintaining one source document for all formats.
+   files, while only maintaining one source document for all formats.
    The tools used for formatting <acronym>HTML</acronym> and
    <acronym>TeX</acronym> versions are
    <ulink url="&url.jade;">Jade</ulink>, written by <ulink
@@ -211,15 +182,15 @@
    We use <ulink url="&url.winhelp;">Microsoft HTML Help
    Workshop</ulink> to generate the Windows HTML Help format
    of the manual, and of course PHP itself to do some
-   conversions, and formatting.
+   additional conversions and formatting.
   </para>
   <para>
-   You can download the actual manual in various languages and
+   You can download the manual in various languages and
    formats, including plain text, plain <acronym>HTML</acronym>,
    <acronym>PDF</acronym>, PalmPilot DOC, PalmPilot iSilo and
    Windows HTML Help, from
    <ulink url="&url.php.docs;">&url.php.docs;</ulink>.
-   The manuals are updated as the source XML files are changed.
+   The manuals are updated automatically as the text is updated.
   </para>
   <para>
    You can find more information about downloading the


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