goba            Sun Feb  3 16:50:57 2002 EDT

  Modified files:              
    /phpdoc/en  preface.xml 
    /phpdoc/en/chapters intro.xml 
  Log:
  Modify PHP definition, as requested by Andrei Zmiewski, to reflect
  php.net/index.php and Freshmeat descriptions> Quoting Andrei:
  
  | Well, I think it should be changed - that's what Freshmeat
  | entry for PHP says (I rewrote it a couple of years ago).
  
  
Index: phpdoc/en/preface.xml
diff -u phpdoc/en/preface.xml:1.24 phpdoc/en/preface.xml:1.25
--- phpdoc/en/preface.xml:1.24  Mon Dec 17 16:45:16 2001
+++ phpdoc/en/preface.xml       Sun Feb  3 16:50:57 2002
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="iso-8859-1"?>
-<!-- $Revision: 1.24 $ -->
+<!-- $Revision: 1.25 $ -->
 
  <preface id="preface">
   <title>Preface</title>
@@ -7,11 +7,12 @@
   <abstract>
    <simpara>
     <acronym>PHP</acronym>, which stands for "PHP: Hypertext
-    Preprocessor", is an open-source HTML-embedded scripting
-    language. Much of its syntax is borrowed from C, Java and
-    Perl with some unique features thrown in. The main goal of
+    Preprocessor" is a widely-used Open Source general-purpose
+    scripting language that is especially suited for Web
+    development and can be embedded into HTML. Its syntax draws
+    upon C, Java, and Perl, and is easy to learn. The main goal of
     the language is to allow web developers to write dynamically
-    generated pages quickly, but you can do much more with PHP.
+    generated webpages quickly, but you can do much more with PHP.
    </simpara>
   </abstract>
 
Index: phpdoc/en/chapters/intro.xml
diff -u phpdoc/en/chapters/intro.xml:1.28 phpdoc/en/chapters/intro.xml:1.29
--- phpdoc/en/chapters/intro.xml:1.28   Tue Jan 29 09:53:00 2002
+++ phpdoc/en/chapters/intro.xml        Sun Feb  3 16:50:57 2002
@@ -1,13 +1,15 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="iso-8859-1"?>
-<!-- $Revision: 1.28 $ -->
+<!-- $Revision: 1.29 $ -->
  <chapter id="introduction">
   <title>Introduction</title>
 
   <sect1 id="intro-whatis">
    <title>What is PHP?</title>
    <para>
-    PHP (recursive acronym for "PHP: Hypertext Preprocessor")
-    is an open-source server-side HTML-embedded scripting language.
+    <acronym>PHP</acronym> (recursive acronym for "PHP: Hypertext
+    Preprocessor") is a widely-used Open Source general-purpose
+    scripting language that is especially suited for Web
+    development and can be embedded into HTML.
    </para>
    <para>
     Simple answer, but what does that mean? An example:


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