sander          Sun Jun 30 06:41:45 2002 EDT

  Modified files:              
    /phpdoc/en/faq      html.xml 
    /phpdoc/en/language references.xml 
    /phpdoc/en/reference/cyrus/functions        cyrus-authenticate.xml 
                                                cyrus-close.xml 
    /phpdoc/en/reference/math/functions abs.xml 
    /phpdoc/en/reference/misc/functions uniqid.xml 
    /phpdoc/en/reference/mnogosearch    reference.xml 
    /phpdoc/en/reference/mssql/functions        mssql-execute.xml 
    /phpdoc/en/reference/oci8   reference.xml 
    /phpdoc/en/reference/ovrimos        reference.xml 
  Log:
  Various minor typos, thanks to Paul Hudson for spotting most of them...
  
  
Index: phpdoc/en/faq/html.xml
diff -u phpdoc/en/faq/html.xml:1.16 phpdoc/en/faq/html.xml:1.17
--- phpdoc/en/faq/html.xml:1.16 Thu Mar 28 11:32:59 2002
+++ phpdoc/en/faq/html.xml      Sun Jun 30 06:41:42 2002
@@ -1,20 +1,19 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="iso-8859-1"?>
-<!-- $Revision: 1.16 $ -->
+<!-- $Revision: 1.17 $ -->
  <chapter id="faq.html">
   <title>PHP and HTML</title>
   <titleabbrev>PHP and HTML</titleabbrev>
 
   <para>
-   PHP and HTML interact a lot: PHP generate HTML, and HTML
-   has informations that will be sent to PHP.
+   PHP and HTML interact a lot: PHP can generate HTML, and HTML
+   can pass information to PHP.
   </para>
 
   <qandaset>
    <qandaentry id="faq.html.encoding">
     <question>
      <para>
-      What encodings/decodings do I need when I pass a value on via a form?
-      And via an URL?
+      What encoding/decoding do I need when I pass a value through a form/URL?
      </para>
     </question>
     <answer>
@@ -27,8 +26,8 @@
        <listitem>
         <para>
          HTML interpretation. In order to specify a random string, you
-         <emphasis>must</emphasis> include it in double quotes, and htmlspecialchars
-         the the whole value.
+         <emphasis>must</emphasis> include it in double quotes, and 
+         htmlspecialchars the whole value.
         </para>
        </listitem>
        <listitem>
@@ -76,7 +75,7 @@
       <note>
        <simpara>
         The data is shown in the browser as intended, because the browser will
-        interpret the html escaped symbols.
+        interpret the HTML escaped symbols.
        </simpara>
        <simpara>
         Upon submitting, either via GET or POST, the data will be urlencoded
@@ -255,7 +254,7 @@
       Note that if you are using JavaScript the <literal>[]</literal>
       on the element name might cause you problems when you try to
       refer to the element by name. Use it's numerical form element
-      id instead, or enclose the variable name in single quotes and
+      ID instead, or enclose the variable name in single quotes and
       use that as the index to the elements array, for example:
       <programlisting>
 variable = documents.forms[0].elements['var[]'];
Index: phpdoc/en/language/references.xml
diff -u phpdoc/en/language/references.xml:1.23 phpdoc/en/language/references.xml:1.24
--- phpdoc/en/language/references.xml:1.23      Mon Jun 10 06:51:58 2002
+++ phpdoc/en/language/references.xml   Sun Jun 30 06:41:42 2002
@@ -1,12 +1,12 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="iso-8859-1"?>
-<!-- $Revision: 1.23 $ -->
+<!-- $Revision: 1.24 $ -->
  <chapter id="language.references">
   <title>References Explained</title>
 
   <sect1 id="language.references.whatare">
    <title>What References Are</title>
    <simpara>  
-    References are a means in PHP to access the same variable content 
+    References in PHP are a means to access the same variable content 
     by different names. They are not like C pointers, they are symbol
     table aliases. Note that in PHP, variable name and variable content 
     are different, so the same content can have different names.
Index: phpdoc/en/reference/cyrus/functions/cyrus-authenticate.xml
diff -u phpdoc/en/reference/cyrus/functions/cyrus-authenticate.xml:1.2 
phpdoc/en/reference/cyrus/functions/cyrus-authenticate.xml:1.3
--- phpdoc/en/reference/cyrus/functions/cyrus-authenticate.xml:1.2      Wed Apr 17 
02:37:07 2002
+++ phpdoc/en/reference/cyrus/functions/cyrus-authenticate.xml  Sun Jun 30 06:41:42 
+2002
@@ -1,10 +1,10 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="iso-8859-1"?>
-<!-- $Revision: 1.2 $ -->
+<!-- $Revision: 1.3 $ -->
 <!-- splitted from ./en/functions/cyrus.xml, last change in rev 1.1 -->
   <refentry id="function.cyrus-authenticate">
    <refnamediv>
     <refname>cyrus_authenticate</refname>
-    <refpurpose>Authenticate agaings a Cyrus IMAP server </refpurpose>
+    <refpurpose>Authenticate against a Cyrus IMAP server </refpurpose>
    </refnamediv>
    <refsect1>
     <title>Description</title>
Index: phpdoc/en/reference/cyrus/functions/cyrus-close.xml
diff -u phpdoc/en/reference/cyrus/functions/cyrus-close.xml:1.2 
phpdoc/en/reference/cyrus/functions/cyrus-close.xml:1.3
--- phpdoc/en/reference/cyrus/functions/cyrus-close.xml:1.2     Wed Apr 17 02:37:08 
2002
+++ phpdoc/en/reference/cyrus/functions/cyrus-close.xml Sun Jun 30 06:41:42 2002
@@ -1,10 +1,10 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="iso-8859-1"?>
-<!-- $Revision: 1.2 $ -->
+<!-- $Revision: 1.3 $ -->
 <!-- splitted from ./en/functions/cyrus.xml, last change in rev 1.1 -->
   <refentry id="function.cyrus-close">
    <refnamediv>
     <refname>cyrus_close</refname>
-    <refpurpose>Close connection to a cyrus server </refpurpose>
+    <refpurpose>Close connection to a Cyrus IMAP server </refpurpose>
    </refnamediv>
    <refsect1>
     <title>Description</title>
Index: phpdoc/en/reference/math/functions/abs.xml
diff -u phpdoc/en/reference/math/functions/abs.xml:1.2 
phpdoc/en/reference/math/functions/abs.xml:1.3
--- phpdoc/en/reference/math/functions/abs.xml:1.2      Wed Apr 17 02:39:49 2002
+++ phpdoc/en/reference/math/functions/abs.xml  Sun Jun 30 06:41:42 2002
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="iso-8859-1"?>
-<!-- $Revision: 1.2 $ -->
+<!-- $Revision: 1.3 $ -->
 <!-- splitted from ./en/functions/math.xml, last change in rev 1.2 -->
   <refentry id="function.abs">
    <refnamediv>
@@ -13,7 +13,8 @@
       <methodparam><type>mixed</type><parameter>number</parameter></methodparam>
      </methodsynopsis>
     <para>
-     Returns the absolute value of number.  If the argument number is
+     Returns the absolute value of <parameter>number</parameter>. If the
+     argument <parameter>number</parameter> is
      of type <type>float</type>, the return type is also <type>float</type>, 
      otherwise it is <type>integer</type> (as <type>float</type> usually has a
      bigger value range than <type>integer</type>).
Index: phpdoc/en/reference/misc/functions/uniqid.xml
diff -u phpdoc/en/reference/misc/functions/uniqid.xml:1.2 
phpdoc/en/reference/misc/functions/uniqid.xml:1.3
--- phpdoc/en/reference/misc/functions/uniqid.xml:1.2   Wed Apr 17 02:40:43 2002
+++ phpdoc/en/reference/misc/functions/uniqid.xml       Sun Jun 30 06:41:43 2002
@@ -1,10 +1,10 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="iso-8859-1"?>
-<!-- $Revision: 1.2 $ -->
+<!-- $Revision: 1.3 $ -->
 <!-- splitted from ./en/functions/misc.xml, last change in rev 1.2 -->
   <refentry id="function.uniqid">
    <refnamediv>
     <refname>uniqid</refname>
-    <refpurpose>Generate a unique id</refpurpose>
+    <refpurpose>Generate a unique ID</refpurpose>
    </refnamediv>
    <refsect1>
     <title>Description</title>
Index: phpdoc/en/reference/mnogosearch/reference.xml
diff -u phpdoc/en/reference/mnogosearch/reference.xml:1.2 
phpdoc/en/reference/mnogosearch/reference.xml:1.3
--- phpdoc/en/reference/mnogosearch/reference.xml:1.2   Mon Apr 15 14:56:49 2002
+++ phpdoc/en/reference/mnogosearch/reference.xml       Sun Jun 30 06:41:43 2002
@@ -1,18 +1,18 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="iso-8859-1"?>
-<!-- $Revision: 1.2 $ -->
+<!-- $Revision: 1.3 $ -->
 <reference id="ref.mnogo">
  <title>mnoGoSearch Functions</title>
  <titleabbrev>mnoGoSearch</titleabbrev>
  <partintro>
   <simpara>
-   These functions allow you to access mnoGoSearch (former
+   These functions allow you to access the mnoGoSearch (former
    UdmSearch) free search engine.  In order to have these
-   functions available, you must compile php with mnogosearch
+   functions available, you must compile PHP with mnogosearch
    support by using the
    <link linkend="install.configure.with-mnogosearch"><option role="configure">
    --with-mnogosearch</option></link>
    option. If you use this option without specifying the
-   path to mnogosearch, php will look for mnogosearch under
+   path to mnogosearch, PHP will look for mnogosearch under
    /usr/local/mnogosearch path by default. If you installed
    mnogosearch at other path you should specify it:
    <link linkend="install.configure.with-mnogosearch"><option role="configure">
@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@
    mnoGoSearch is a full-featured search engine software for intranet and internet 
servers,
    distributed under the GNU license. mnoGoSearch has number of unique features, 
which makes
    it appropriate for a wide range of application from search within your site to a 
specialized
-   search system such as cooking recipes or newspaper search, ftp archive search, 
news articles search,
+   search system such as cooking recipes or newspaper search, FTP archive search, 
+news articles search,
    etc. It offers full-text indexing and searching for HTML, PDF, and text documents. 
mnoGoSearch
    consists of two parts. The first is an indexing mechanism (indexer). The purpose 
of indexer is
    to walk through HTTP, FTP, NEWS servers or local files, recursively grabbing all 
the documents
@@ -33,18 +33,18 @@
   </para>
   <note>
    <para>
-    php contains built-in mysql access library, which can be used to
-    access mysql. It is known that mnoGoSearch is not compatible with
-    this built-in library and can work only with generic mysql
-    libraries. Thus, if you use mnoGoSearch with mysql, during php
-    configuration you have to indicate directory of mysql
+    PHP contains built-in mysql access library, which can be used to
+    access MySQL. It is known that mnoGoSearch is not compatible with
+    this built-in library and can work only with generic MySQL
+    libraries. Thus, if you use mnoGoSearch with mysql, during PHP
+    configuration you have to indicate directory of MySQL
     installation, that was used during mnoGoSearch configuration, i.e. for example:
     <link linkend="install.configure.with-mnogosearch"><option role="configure">
     --with-mnogosearch --with-mysql=/usr</option></link>.
    </para>
   </note>
   <simpara>
-   You need at least 3.1.10 version of mnoGoSearch installed to use
+   You need at least version 3.1.10 of mnoGoSearch installed to use
    these functions.
   </simpara>
   <simpara>
Index: phpdoc/en/reference/mssql/functions/mssql-execute.xml
diff -u phpdoc/en/reference/mssql/functions/mssql-execute.xml:1.2 
phpdoc/en/reference/mssql/functions/mssql-execute.xml:1.3
--- phpdoc/en/reference/mssql/functions/mssql-execute.xml:1.2   Wed Apr 17 02:41:00 
2002
+++ phpdoc/en/reference/mssql/functions/mssql-execute.xml       Sun Jun 30 06:41:43 
+2002
@@ -1,11 +1,11 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="iso-8859-1"?>
-<!-- $Revision: 1.2 $ -->
+<!-- $Revision: 1.3 $ -->
 <!-- splitted from ./en/functions/mssql.xml, last change in rev 1.24 -->
   <refentry id='function.mssql-execute'>
    <refnamediv>
     <refname>mssql_execute</refname>
     <refpurpose>
-     Executes a stored procedure on a MS-SQL server database
+     Executes a stored procedure on a MS SQL server database
     </refpurpose>
    </refnamediv>
    <refsect1>
Index: phpdoc/en/reference/oci8/reference.xml
diff -u phpdoc/en/reference/oci8/reference.xml:1.2 
phpdoc/en/reference/oci8/reference.xml:1.3
--- phpdoc/en/reference/oci8/reference.xml:1.2  Mon Apr 15 17:57:11 2002
+++ phpdoc/en/reference/oci8/reference.xml      Sun Jun 30 06:41:43 2002
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="iso-8859-1"?>
-<!-- $Revision: 1.2 $ -->
+<!-- $Revision: 1.3 $ -->
  <reference id="ref.oci8">
   <title>Oracle 8 functions</title>
   <titleabbrev>OCI8</titleabbrev>
@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@
    </para>
    <para>
     Before using this extension, make sure that you have set up your
-    oracle environment variables properly for the Oracle user, as well
+    Oracle environment variables properly for the Oracle user, as well
     as your web daemon user. The variables you might need to set are as
     follows:
     <itemizedlist>
Index: phpdoc/en/reference/ovrimos/reference.xml
diff -u phpdoc/en/reference/ovrimos/reference.xml:1.2 
phpdoc/en/reference/ovrimos/reference.xml:1.3
--- phpdoc/en/reference/ovrimos/reference.xml:1.2       Mon Apr 15 17:57:12 2002
+++ phpdoc/en/reference/ovrimos/reference.xml   Sun Jun 30 06:41:44 2002
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="iso-8859-1"?>
-<!-- $Revision: 1.2 $ -->
+<!-- $Revision: 1.3 $ -->
  <reference id="ref.ovrimos">
   <title>Ovrimos SQL functions</title>
   <titleabbrev>OvrimosSQL</titleabbrev>
@@ -12,7 +12,8 @@
    <para>
     Ovrimos SQL Server is available at <ulink
     url="&url.ovrimos;">www.ovrimos.com</ulink>.  To enable ovrimos
-    support in PHP just compile php with the '--with-ovrimos'
+    support in PHP just compile PHP with the <option
+    role="configure">--with-ovrimos</option>
     parameter to configure script. You'll need to install the sqlcli
     library available in the Ovrimos SQL Server distribution.
    </para>
@@ -39,7 +40,7 @@
 ]]>
      </programlisting>
     </example>
-    This will just connect to SQL Server.
+    This will just connect to an Ovrimos SQL server.
    </para>
   </partintro>
 

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