From:             collin at xs4all dot nl
Operating system: n/a
PHP version:      Irrelevant
PHP Bug Type:     Documentation problem
Bug description:  Documentation on "Database Security" should be edited by a native 
speaker

Description:
------------
Hello excellent developers of the excellent PHP! Let me begin by stating
that normally I find the PHP documentation to be excellent, and that any
glitches are but ripples in an otherwise smooth experience.

Unfortunately, the documentation on "Database Security"
(http://www.php.net/manual/en/security.index.php) reads like it was
written by a learner of the English language. It apparently has not been
spell-checked (I take it 'connecion' is not an English word) and some
sentences are complete mysteries to me. For example, I have no idea what
the author means by 'In the more place you take the more action to
increase the protection of your database, the less probability of that an
attacker succeeds'.

May I suggest that a native speaker of English reads the document in
question and tries to rewrite the parts that need it in clear and concise
English?

I am not a native speaker of English myself, or I would send in patches
and/or suggestions myself.

Many thanks in advance.



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