ID:               25915
 User updated by:  midg3t at mail dot com
 Reported By:      midg3t at mail dot com
 Status:           Open
 Bug Type:         Documentation problem
 Operating System: na
 PHP Version:      Irrelevant
 New Comment:

While reviewing my submission I came across the following error.

"We would like to advice you to choose a mirror site close to use in
your everyday work."

The word "advice" should be "advise". The sentence's meaning is a
little unclear. It might be better to mention something about
geographical location rather than "close to use in your ... work".

I suggest:

We suggest you to choose a mirror site geographically close to you.

Things are getting a little bit complicated here. I don't want to sound
like a nut, but I think the whole paragraph needs re-writing. I'll
leave that up to you (unless you'd like me to suggest something).


Previous Comments:
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[2003-10-20 01:17:52] midg3t at mail dot com

Fixed summary, it referred to the wrong page (brain fart). The page
this bug relates to is as follows:

http://www.php.net/mirrors.php

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[2003-10-20 01:12:42] midg3t at mail dot com

Description:
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"This means that you don't loose anything, if you go with a local
mirror site, but you gain speed."

The word "loose" means something along the lines of "not fitting". I
think the word "loose" should be replaced by "lose", being the verb
form of "lost".

The first comma in the sentence is redundant -- the sentence reads
better without it.

Suggested fix:

"This means that you don't lose anything if you go with a local mirror
site, but you gain speed."



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