[PHP-DOC] cvs: phpdoc /en/reference/sockets/functions socket-bind.xml

[Aidan Lister]

aidan           Thu Feb 24 02:38:36 2005 EDT

  Modified files:              
    /phpdoc/en/reference/sockets/functions      socket-bind.xml 
  Log:
  Fix a host of tiny mistakes
  
http://cvs.php.net/diff.php/phpdoc/en/reference/sockets/functions/socket-bind.xml?r1=1.8&r2=1.9&ty=u
Index: phpdoc/en/reference/sockets/functions/socket-bind.xml
diff -u phpdoc/en/reference/sockets/functions/socket-bind.xml:1.8 
phpdoc/en/reference/sockets/functions/socket-bind.xml:1.9
--- phpdoc/en/reference/sockets/functions/socket-bind.xml:1.8   Thu Feb 24 
02:23:58 2005
+++ phpdoc/en/reference/sockets/functions/socket-bind.xml       Thu Feb 24 
02:38:36 2005
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="iso-8859-1"?>
-<!-- $Revision: 1.8 $ -->
+<!-- $Revision: 1.9 $ -->
 <refentry id="function.socket-bind">
  <refnamediv>
   <refname>socket_bind</refname>
@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@
       </para>
       <para>
        If the socket is of the <constant>AF_UNIX</constant> family, the
-       <parameter>address</parameter> is the pathname of a
+       <parameter>address</parameter> is the path of a
        Unix-domain socket (e.g. <filename>/tmp/my.sock</filename>).
       </para>
      </listitem>
@@ -70,14 +70,6 @@
    This code may be passed to <function>socket_strerror</function> to get a
    textual explanation of the error.
   </para>
-  <note>
-   <para>
-    Windows 9x/ME compatability note:
-    <function>socket_last_error</function> may return an invalid error code
-    if trying to bind the socket to a wrong address that does not belong to
-    your machine.
-   </para>
-  </note>
  </refsect1>
 
  <refsect1 role="examples">
@@ -96,14 +88,14 @@
 $sourceips['madcoder'] = '127.0.0.2';
 
 // Bind the source address
-socket_bind($sock, $computerips['madcoder']);
+socket_bind($sock, $sourceips['madcoder']);
 
 // Connect to destination address
 socket_connect($sock, '127.0.0.1', 80);
 
 // Write
 $request = 'GET / HTTP/1.1' . "\r\n" .
-           'Host: example.com' . "\r\n\";
+           'Host: example.com' . "\r\n\r\n";
 socket_write($sock, $request);
 
 // Close
@@ -124,6 +116,14 @@
     <function>socket_connect</function>.
    </para>
   </note>
+  <note>
+   <para>
+    Windows 9x/ME compatibility note:
+    <function>socket_last_error</function> may return an invalid error code
+    if trying to bind the socket to a wrong address that does not belong to
+    your machine.
+   </para>
+  </note>
  </refsect1>
 
  <refsect1 role="seealso">