> 2009/7/5 Daniel Brown <[email protected]>:
> Still, there are a couple of minor changes
> and some typofixes herein.

I also made a few, very minor changes in an effort to make sentences
flow a little better (for me at least) and to fix an existing typo
("explaination").

> My only real question is if we want to
> leave the "kick-ass" portion in there, since it's going on the main
> page, or if we'd want to approach it with a slightly more professional
> tenor.  I don't think it's inappropriate to a level of being obscene,
> but maybe a bit abrasive.

For what it's worth, I'd rather see "kick-ass awesome" in there than
it being left out. :)

>    Regardless, the new XML is attached.

Ditto.
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  <title>Thin documentation?</title>
  <id>http://www.php.net/archive/2009.php#id2009-07-05-1</id>
  <published>2009-07-05T01:40:12+02:00</published>
  <updated>2009-07-05T01:40:12+02:00</updated>
  <category term="frontpage" label="PHP.net frontpage news"/>
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  <content type="xhtml">
    <div xmlns="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml";>
     <p>Since the inception of PHP it has been known for having _the_ <strong>best</strong>, kick-ass awesome documentation.</p>
     <p>In recent years, some have commented on the fact that the documentation of new features is insufficient, and lacks in-detail explanations and descriptions of common "what-if" scenarios.</p>
     <p>Effective immediately, we are placing an open call for volunteers to help the project to get up to speed with the massive changes PHP has undergone in recent years, and to catch up with all the new features the language has to offer.</p>
     <p>Obviously any and all contributions to the project are very much appreciated and getting a CVS account along with the appropriate karma is a very simple task.</p>
     <p>If you are interested in helping out, please contact the documentation team at <a href="mailto:[email protected]">[email protected]</a> today.</p>
    </div>
  </content>
</entry>

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