On Wed, Jan 5, 2011 at 17:09, Braian Iván Monnier <x1v...@php.net> wrote:
> Hello everybody.
>
> Can anyone take a look at this update, please? It's the first time I've done
> a doc update and I'm not sure if I did it correctly. Thanks in advance!
>
> Monnier, Braian Iván.
>

    The patch looks good, but I would reword this:

        "but it is appointed through the mhash documentation"

    To this:

        "but it is listed in the mhash documentation"

    More similar to the original, really, because if it is "appointed
through" something, that would mean it was designated by the
documentation, as if the documentation directed the code, and not the
other way around.

    Other than that, looks like you're good to commit.

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