* [EMAIL PROTECTED] <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> [2008-02-26 22:21]:
> Just a few editorial comments from me.

  Thanks for the feedback.  On a first read, it looks like I'll apply
  most of these.  

  (One of the aspects of our ARC materials that I really want to get
  right this time is that the bulk of the effort should go into the
  product documentation--the developer guide and the manual pages--and
  not into the design document.  So reminding me to write more
  understandable sentences is always appreciated!)

  - Stephen

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