Thank you!! I'll go thru your edits and respond. I'll leave this off the group aliases unless there's a significant issue that needs discussion. Barbara
Joseph J VLcek wrote: > [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote: >> Indiana Participants: >> >> 1) Please review the documentation that we are developing for >> OpenSolaris 2008.05 release, and email your edits and comments to us >> by Friday, 4/25. Feedback received after 4/25 may not be integrated >> in time for the May release. >> >> The documentation is available for review in HTML and .pdf. >> >> HTML format is available at: >> http://dlc.sun.com/osol/docs/content/IPS/getst1.html >> >> .pdf format is available at: >> http://www.opensolaris.org/os/project/indiana/files/ >> Note: Please ignore the Sun logo on .pdf copy. The final >> documentation will be in the OpenSolaris HTML format. >> >> This documentation includes three main sections: >> Getting Started with installing OpenSolaris 2008.05 (owner: >> Barbara) >> Image Packaging System documentation (owner: Jyothi) >> Upgrading and Managing Multiple Boot Environments (owner: Barbara) >> >> 2) We are looking for more examples for the "Creating an IPS Package" >> section. In particular, send us specific examples of creating an IPS >> package for a C application or a Web Stack application and publishing >> to an IPS repository. >> >> 3) Please also review and send suggestions about Michelle Olson's new >> main documentation hub at: >> >> http://opensolaris.org/os/community/documentation/doc_splash/ >> This page replaces the "Gateway to Indiana" page on the Project >> Indiana site, although the "Gateway to Indiana" page will be updated >> for 2008.05. >> >> Note: The documentation is developed in a prototype mercurial >> repository. For the May release, email us your edits. After the May >> release, we'll open this repository to interested contributers. >> >> Barbara Lundquist >> Jyothi Srinath >> >> >> >> >> _______________________________________________ >> indiana-discuss mailing list >> [EMAIL PROTECTED] >> http://mail.opensolaris.org/mailman/listinfo/indiana-discuss > > > > Barbara, > > My comments are in the attached text file. The document looks very > good and I think will be very helpful to new users. Much of what I > have are simple nits. I tried to read through this with the > perspective of a new user. > > I still have to read through the last 10 pages or so and will do that > tomorrow, Friday 4/25 AM > > Joe VLcek > > _______________________________________________ pkg-discuss mailing list [email protected] http://mail.opensolaris.org/mailman/listinfo/pkg-discuss
