Shawn, Thanks for the corrections.
I am not sure about this, but in pdf, the text gets adjusted to fit with the even and odd page margins (for printing). Hence the tables don't seem to line up. Thanks, Jyothi Shawn Walker wrote: > [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote: > >> IPS and Indiana Folks, >> >> The first draft of OpenSolaris 2008.11 IPS Guide is ready for review. >> The pdf document is available at : >> >> http://www.opensolaris.org/os/project/indiana/files/ips.pdf >> >> This is a WIP book and some links may be missing or pointing to older >> documentation. More examples and glossary terms will be added. >> >> New information is spread throughout the book and chapters 5 and 7, >> on Keys and Certificates and Mirroring Repositories is completely new. >> >> Please send me your feedback and comments by 10/28. >> >> Thanks for taking the time to review! > > > In the section, "How to Delete The Command History Information" -- > "pkg purge-history" is repeated twice, and is missing "pfexec" in > front of it. > > Table 3-7: > The description for -t socket_timeout is incorrect. It says it > overrides pkg/threads instead of pkg/socket_timeout. > > The -s option (threads) is missing. > > When the table is continued on page 38, it is no longer "lines up" > horizontally with the table on page 37. > > Table 7-1: > The description for the -l option of pkg history is not quite > right. -l does not mean "display log records", it means display > history using long format, or put another way, display detailed > history information. Without the -l, a summary view of history is > displayed instead. See man pkg.1 > > Cheers, -- Jyothi Srinath Technical Writer Solaris Developers Group 650-786-9830 _______________________________________________ pkg-discuss mailing list [email protected] http://mail.opensolaris.org/mailman/listinfo/pkg-discuss
