Shawn Walker wrote:

>   http://cr.opensolaris.org/~swalker/pkg-misc/

pkgrecv.1.txt:

  - While TMPDIR, TEMP, and TMP may all be ways to manipulate mkstemp(), I
    don't think we should document all of these.  If TMPDIR is recognized
    preferentially to the others (and I'd hope so), then that's the one we
    should mention.

  - I'd also see if rephrasing PKG_DEST and PKG_SRC so that you didn't end
    sentences with prepositions didn't sound too stilted.

Otherwise, LGTM.

Danek
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