I don't think would be really called spelling errors; if anything they'd be grammar errors. And I agree with Brian Murray, I've never seen anything references to as "death-match"
-- You received this bug notification because you are a member of Debian/Ubuntu Games Team, which is subscribed to alien-arena in Ubuntu. https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/834369 Title: Spelling and Grammar Errors in Control file Status in One Hundred Paper Cuts: Confirmed Status in “alien-arena” package in Ubuntu: Triaged Bug description: 1. Open the Ubuntu Software Center 2. Search for Alien Arena 3. Click the 'More Info' button There are some spelling and grammar errors in the description: deathmatch = death-match 32 bit = 32-bit hi resolution = hi-resolution hi poly = hi-poly For the description I think it might be better to add some commas to break up the long sentences. I suggest: "ALIEN ARENA is a standalone 3D first person online death-match shooter crafted from the original source code of Quake II and Quake III, released by id Software under the GPL license. With features including 32-bit graphics, a new particle engine and effects, light blooms, reflective water, hi-resolution textures and skins, and hi-poly models and stain maps, ALIEN ARENA pushes the envelope of graphical beauty rivalling today's top games." I will add a patch to this report and push my suggestions up to launchpad. Thanks Paul ProblemType: Bug DistroRelease: Ubuntu 11.04 Package: alien-arena (not installed) ProcVersionSignature: Ubuntu 2.6.38-11.48-generic 2.6.38.8 Uname: Linux 2.6.38-11-generic x86_64 Architecture: amd64 Date: Thu Aug 25 20:42:21 2011 InstallationMedia: Ubuntu 11.04 "Natty Narwhal" - Release amd64 (20110427.1) ProcEnviron: LANGUAGE=en_US:en LANG=en_US.UTF-8 SHELL=/bin/bash SourcePackage: alien-arena UpgradeStatus: No upgrade log present (probably fresh install) To manage notifications about this bug go to: https://bugs.launchpad.net/hundredpapercuts/+bug/834369/+subscriptions _______________________________________________ Pkg-games-ubuntu mailing list [email protected] http://lists.alioth.debian.org/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/pkg-games-ubuntu
