A few comments on the proposed description synopsis:

> Subject: RFP: openjump -- OpenJUMP is an open source Geographic Information
>       System
>       (GIS) written in Java

"OpenJUMP is": should be omitted as this is implied (see Developer's

"open source": this is Debian, so everything in main is "open source"

"written in Java": users don't really care, at least in the
synopsis. May be a mention in the long description

That leaves use with:

Geographic Information System (GIS)

....eventually even dropping capitals (This Is Not German..:-))... And
Yes I Know Only Nouns Take Capitals In German)

Maybe, then adding room for a few words about what makes OpenJUMP
specific wrt other GIS....

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