Package: init-system-helpers
Version: 1.69+nmu1
Severity: minor
Tags: patch

  Additional remarks.

  Mails from me to "[email protected]" are no longer acknowledged.  A
Debian maintainer told me, that he would contact the mail administrator
about me not wanting to send bugs upstream.

-.-

Dear Maintainer,

>From "/usr/share/doc/debian/bug-reporting.txt.gz":

  Don't file bugs upstream

   If you file a bug in Debian, don't send a copy to the upstream software
   maintainers yourself, as it is possible that the bug exists only in
   Debian. If necessary, the maintainer of the package will forward the
   bug upstream.

-.-

  For forwarding bug reports to upstream see:

https://www.debian.org/Bugs/Developer#forward

-.-

  "Handling bug reports" in
http://people.debian.org/~enrico/dcg/ch03s02.html

-.-

  I do not send reports upstream if I have to get an account there.
The Debian maintainers have one already.

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   * What led up to the situation?

     Checking for defects with a new version

test-[g|n]roff -mandoc -t -K utf8 -rF0 -rHY=0 -rCHECKSTYLE=0 -ww -z < "man page"

  [Use 

grep -n -e ' $' -e '\\~$' -e ' \\f.$' -e ' \\"' -e ' "$' <file>

  to find (most) trailing spaces.]

  ["test-groff" is a script in the repository for "groff"; is not shipped]
(local copy and "troff" slightly changed by me).

  [The fate of "test-nroff" was decided in groff bug #55941.]

   * What was the outcome of this action?

Output from "test-groff  -mandoc  -K utf8 -rF0 -rHY=0 -ww -z ":

an.tmac:<stdin>:31: style: .TH missing third argument; consider document 
modification date in ISO 8601 format (YYYY-MM-DD)
troff:<stdin>:78: warning: register 'an-margin' not defined [-w reg]
troff:<stdin>:175: warning: end of sentence detected before end of text line 
[-w style]
troff:<stdin>:190: warning: end of sentence detected before end of text line 
[-w style]

   * What outcome did you expect instead?

     No output (no warnings).

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  General remarks and further material, if a diff-file exist, are in the
attachments.


-- System Information:
Debian Release: forky/sid
  APT prefers testing
  APT policy: (500, 'testing')
Architecture: amd64 (x86_64)

Kernel: Linux 7.1.8+deb14-amd64 (SMP w/2 CPU threads; PREEMPT)
Locale: LANG=is_IS.iso88591, LC_CTYPE=is_IS.iso88591 (charmap=ISO-8859-1), 
LANGUAGE not set
Shell: /bin/sh linked to /usr/bin/dash
Init: sysvinit (via /sbin/init)

Versions of packages init-system-helpers is related to:
ii  insserv  1.27.0-1

-- no debconf information
Input file is invoke-rc.d.8

Output from "mandoc -T lint  invoke-rc.d.8": (shortened list)

      1 STYLE: input text line longer than 80 bytes
      1 WARNING: missing date, using "": TH
      7 WARNING: skipping paragraph macro: sp after SH

-.-.

Output from
test-groff mandoc -Kutf8 -ww -z invoke-rc.d.8: (shortened list)

      1 .TH missing third argument; consider document modification date in ISO 
8601 format (YYYY-MM-DD)
      2 end of sentence detected before end of text line [-w style]
      1 register 'an-margin' not defined [-w reg]

-.-.

Show if generated from reStructuredText or rd2

  A patch to a generated man page is to show where the generator
failed to make a "clean" man page rendering (that is without warnings) and
sometimes to show a better format for it.
  Generated files create bigger and more difficult to read/check patches
when the generator creats long lines, instead of shorter ones or by
postprocesing its output in such a way.

  A patch may be applied to a generated man page to fix it before distribution,
until the sources of the defects have been fixed.

1:.\" Man page generated from reStructuredText
2:.\" by the Docutils 0.22.4 manpage writer.

Latest version: docutils (Docutils 0.22.4, Python 3.14.6, on linux)

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Wrong distance (not two spaces, not a new line character (\n)) between
sentences in the input file.

  Separate the sentences and subordinate clauses; each begins on a new
line.  See man-pages(7) ("Conventions for source file layout") and
"info groff" ("Input Conventions").

  The best procedure is to always start a new sentence on a new line,
at least, if you are typing on a computer.

Remember coding: Only one command ("sentence") on each (logical) line.

E-mail: Easier to quote exactly the relevant lines.

Generally: Easier to edit the sentence.

Patches: Less unaffected text.

Search for two adjacent words is easier, when they belong to the same line,
and the same phrase.

  The amount of space between sentences in the output can then be
controlled with the ".ss" request.

Mark a final abbreviation point as such by suffixing it with "\&".

Some sentences (etc.) do not begin on a new line.

Split (sometimes) lines after a punctuation mark; before a conjunction.

  Lines with only one (or two) space(s) between sentences could be split,
so latter sentences begin on a new line.

Use

#!/usr/bin/sh

sed -e '/^\./n' \
-e 's/\([[:alpha:]]\)\.  */\1.\n/g' $1

to split lines after a sentence period.
Check result with the difference between the formatted outputs.
See also the attachment "general.bugs"

100:Returns one of the status codes 100\-106. Does not
121:returned by the init script. Init scripts should not return status codes in
122:the 100+ range (which is reserved in Debian and by the LSB). The status 
codes
148:Init script (or policy layer) subsystem malfunction. Also, forced

-.-.

Split lines longer than 80 characters (fill completely
an A4 sized page line on a terminal)
into two or more lines.
Appropriate break points are the end of a sentence and a subordinate
clause; after punctuation marks.

Line 36, length 105

\fBinvoke\-rc.d\fP [\fI\-\-quiet\fP] [\fI\-\-force\fP] [\fI\-\-try\-anyway\fP] 
[\fI\-\-disclose\-deny\fP]

Line 37, length 100

[\fI\-\-query\fP] [\fI\-\-no\-fallback\fP] \fIname\fP \fIaction\fP [\fIinit 
script parameters...\fP]

Line 62, length 92

\fIstart\fP, \fIstop\fP, \fIforce\-stop\fP, \fIrestart\fP, \fItry\-restart\fP, 
\fIreload\fP,

Longest line is number 36 with 105 characters

-.-.

Put a parenthetical sentence, phrase on a separate line,
if not part of a code.
See man-pages(7), item "semantic newline".

invoke-rc.d.8:65:\fBpolicy\-rc.d\fP (see the \fBINIT SCRIPT POLICY\fP section), 
so
invoke-rc.d.8:122:the 100+ range (which is reserved in Debian and by the LSB). 
The status codes
invoke-rc.d.8:148:Init script (or policy layer) subsystem malfunction. Also, 
forced
invoke-rc.d.8:185:one of them succeeds (a multiple \fIfallback\fP).
invoke-rc.d.8:202:Init script policy layer helper (not required).

-.-.

Use "\(en" (en-dash) to indicate a range, not a minus (\-);
this is not a substraction

Use a word 'to' for a range.

133:.B 1 \- 99

-.-.


Only one space character is after a possible end of sentence
(after a punctuation, that can end a sentence).
Start a new sentence on a new line.

invoke-rc.d.8:100:Returns one of the status codes 100\-106. Does not
invoke-rc.d.8:121:returned by the init script. Init scripts should not return 
status codes in
invoke-rc.d.8:122:the 100+ range (which is reserved in Debian and by the LSB). 
The status codes
invoke-rc.d.8:148:Init script (or policy layer) subsystem malfunction. Also, 
forced

-.-.

Remove quotes when there is a printable
but no space character between them
and the quotes are not for emphasis (markup),
for example as an argument to a macro.

invoke-rc.d.8:31:.TH "invoke-rc.d" "8" "" "1 March 2001" "Debian GNU/Linux"

-.-.

Use "\-" instead of "-" (rendered as a hyphen (u2010) in UTF-8 encoding)
in web addresses.

214:See \%<http://\:bugs\:.debian\:.org/\:sysv-rc> and
215:\%<http://\:bugs\:.debian\:.org/\:init-system-helpers>\&.

-.-.

Output from "test-groff  -mandoc  -K utf8 -rF0 -rHY=0 -ww -z ":

an.tmac:<stdin>:31: style: .TH missing third argument; consider document 
modification date in ISO 8601 format (YYYY-MM-DD)
troff:<stdin>:78: warning: register 'an-margin' not defined [-w reg]
troff:<stdin>:175: warning: end of sentence detected before end of text line 
[-w style]
troff:<stdin>:190: warning: end of sentence detected before end of text line 
[-w style]

-.-

  The register 'an-margin' is an OUTDATED INTERNAL variable in groff's
tmac file 'an.tmac'.

-.-

Generally:

Split (sometimes) lines after a punctuation mark; before a conjunction.

-.-

Tables:

  Use the preprocessor 'tbl' to make tables.

  Put data, that are wider than the header in the (centered) last column,
in a "T{...\nT}" block(, when the table gets wider than the output line).

  Table headings, that are wider than any data in the corresponding
column, do not need to be centered, so left adjustment (l, L) is
sufficient.  There is thereby no change in the standard output.
--- invoke-rc.d.8       2026-08-16 21:00:14.426450764 +0000
+++ invoke-rc.d.8.new   2026-08-16 21:15:54.730166940 +0000
@@ -28,17 +28,15 @@ level margin: \\n[rst2man-indent\\n[rst2
 .\" new: \\n[rst2man-indent\\n[rst2man-indent-level]]
 .in \\n[rst2man-indent\\n[rst2man-indent-level]]u
 ..
-.TH "invoke-rc.d" "8" "" "1 March 2001" "Debian GNU/Linux"
+.TH invoke-rc.d 8 "" "1 March 2001" "Debian GNU/Linux"
 .SH Name
 invoke-rc.d \- executes System-V style init script actions
 .SH SYNOPSIS
-.sp
 \fBinvoke\-rc.d\fP [\fI\-\-quiet\fP] [\fI\-\-force\fP] [\fI\-\-try\-anyway\fP] 
[\fI\-\-disclose\-deny\fP]
 [\fI\-\-query\fP] [\fI\-\-no\-fallback\fP] \fIname\fP \fIaction\fP [\fIinit 
script parameters...\fP]
 .sp
 \fBinvoke\-rc.d\fP [\fI\-\-help\fP]
 .SH DESCRIPTION
-.sp
 \fBinvoke\-rc.d\fP
 is a generic interface to execute System V style init script
 \fB/etc/init.d/\fP\fIname\fP
@@ -57,7 +55,6 @@ More information on invoke\-rc.d can be
 runlevels and init.d scripts of the
 \fIDebian Policy Manual\fP\&.
 .SH INIT SCRIPT ACTIONS
-.sp
 The standard actions are:
 \fIstart\fP, \fIstop\fP, \fIforce\-stop\fP, \fIrestart\fP, \fItry\-restart\fP, 
\fIreload\fP,
 \fIforce\-reload\fP, and \fIstatus\fP\&.
@@ -97,7 +94,7 @@ Return status code 101 instead of status
 the init script action is denied by the policy layer.
 .TP
 .B \fI\-\-query\fP
-Returns one of the status codes 100\-106. Does not
+Returns one of the status codes 100\(en106. Does not
 run the init script, and implies \fI\-\-disclose\-deny\fP
 and \fI\-\-no\-fallback\fP\&.
 .TP
@@ -115,7 +112,6 @@ This is useful for maintainer scripts th
 actions to \fBdeb\-systemd\-invoke\fP(1p)
 .UNINDENT
 .SH STATUS CODES
-.sp
 Should an init script be executed, \fBinvoke\-rc.d\fP
 always returns the status code
 returned by the init script. Init scripts should not return status codes in
@@ -130,7 +126,7 @@ that a fallback action may have been run
 command line), or it was not run because of runlevel/local policy constrains
 and \fB\-\-disclose\-deny\fP is not in effect.
 .TP
-.B 1 \- 99
+.B 1 to 99
 Reserved for init.d script, usually indicates a failure.
 .TP
 .B 100
@@ -168,7 +164,6 @@ The policy layer denied the requested ac
 supplied an allowed fallback action to be used instead.
 .UNINDENT
 .SH INIT SCRIPT POLICY
-.sp
 \fBinvoke\-rc.d\fP
 introduces the concept of a policy layer which is used to verify if
 an init script should be run or not, or if something else should be
@@ -205,14 +200,12 @@ Init script policy layer helper (not req
 System V runlevel configuration.
 .UNINDENT
 .SH NOTES
-.sp
 \fBinvoke\-rc.d\fP special cases the \fIstatus\fP
 action, and returns exit status 4 instead of exit status 0 when
 it is denied.
 .SH BUGS
-.sp
-See \%<http://\:bugs\:.debian\:.org/\:sysv-rc> and
-\%<http://\:bugs\:.debian\:.org/\:init-system-helpers>\&.
+See \%<http://\:bugs\:.debian\:.org/\:sysv\-rc> and
+\%<http://\:bugs\:.debian\:.org/\:init\-system\-helpers>.
 .SH SEE ALSO
 .nf
 \fIDebian Policy manual\fP,
  Check the output from "lintian" in the Debian distribution.

  Any program (person), that produces man pages, should check the output
for defects by using (both groff and nroff)

[gn]roff -mandoc -t -ww -b -z -K utf8 <man page>

  To find most trailing spaces use

grep -n -e ' $' -e ' \\f.$' -e ' \\"' -e ' "$' <man page>

  The same goes for man pages that are used as an input.

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  For a style guide use

  mandoc -T lint

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  For general input conventions consult the man page "nroff(7)" (item
"Input conventions") or the Texinfo manual about the same item.

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  Any "autogenerator" should check its products with the above mentioned
'groff', 'mandoc', and additionally with 'nroff ...'.

  It should also check its input files for too long (> 80) lines.

  This is just a simple quality control measure.

  The "autogenerator" may have to be corrected to get a better man page,
the source file may, and any additional file may.

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  Common defects:

  Not removing trailing spaces (in in- and output).
  The reason for these trailing spaces should be found and eliminated.

  "git" has a "tool" to point out whitespace,
see for example "git-apply(1)" and git-config(1)")

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  Not beginning each input sentence on a new line.

Line length and patch size should thus be reduced when that has been fixed.

  The script "reportbug" uses 'quoted-printable' encoding when a line is
longer than 1024 characters in an 'ascii' file.

  See man-pages(7), item "semantic newline".

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The difference between the formatted output of the original
and patched file can be seen with:

  nroff -mandoc <file1> > <out1>
  nroff -mandoc <file2> > <out2>
  diff -d -u <out1> <out2>

and for groff, using

printf '%s\n%s\n' '.kern 0' '.ss 12 0' | groff -mandoc -Z -

instead of 'nroff -mandoc'

  Add the option '-t', if the file contains a table.

  Read the output from 'diff -d -u ...' with 'less -R' or similar.

-.-.

  If 'man' (man-db) is used to check the manual for warnings,
the following must be set:

  The option "-warnings=w"

  The environmental variable:

export MAN_KEEP_STDERR=yes (or any non-empty value)

  or

  (produce only warnings):

export MANROFFOPT="-ww -b -z"

export MAN_KEEP_STDERR=yes (or any non-empty value)

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