NFS also contains some stringprep profiles:

        - NFSv4: RFC 3530, Section 11
        - NFSv4.1: RFC 5661, Section 14

There are also concerns that the stringprep approach doesn't work well for 
NFSv4.
See section 12 of draft-ietf-nfsv4-rfc3530bis-18.txt for some current thinking
on this topic.

Thanks,
--David


> -----Original Message-----
> From: Black, David
> Sent: Friday, August 03, 2012 12:05 PM
> To: [email protected]
> Cc: Black, David
> Subject: Late comments on problem-statement-06
> 
> I've finally been able to take a look at the problem-statement-06 draft,
> primarily to check the iSCSI material, but I also took a look at the main
> portion of the draft.  I have a few comments, and greatly appreciate the
> patience of the authors and WG chairs in being willing to look at these
> after WG Last Call.  Everything I found here is minor.
> 
> -- Section 2:
> 
>    A single Unicode code point in this memo is denoted by "U+" followed
>    by four to six hexadecimal digits.  Compare to [Unicode61], Appendix
>    A.
> 
> I don't understand what is intended by "Compare".  Is this representation
> the same as, similar to or different from the cited reference?
> 
> -- Section 3
> 
>    During IETF 77, a BOF discussed the current state of the protocols
>    that have defined Stringprep profiles [NEWPREP].
> 
> I'd suggest adding the month and year of IETF 77 in parens after the 77.
> 
>    o  Stringprep is bound to version 3.2 of Unicode.  Stringprep has not
>       been updated to new versions of Unicode.  Therefore, the protocols
>       using Stringprep are stuck to Unicode 3.2.
> 
>    o  The protocols need to be updated to support new versions of
>       Unicode.  The protocols would like to not be bound to a specific
>       version of Unicode, but rather have better Unicode agility in the
>       way of IDNA2008.  This is important partly because it is usually
>       impossible for an application to require Unicode 3.2; the
>       application gets whatever version of Unicode is available on the
>       host.
> 
> I suggest merging first sentence of second bullet into the first bullet
> so that the second bullet focuses on Unicode version agility.  The last
> sentence of the first bullet could then be:
> 
>       Therefore, the protocols using Stringprep are stuck at Unicode 3.2,
>       and their specifications need to be updated to support newer versions
>       of Unicode.
> 
> Also, "Unicode agility" -> "Unicode version agility".
> 
> The following iSCSI bullet is incorrect:
> 
>    o  iSCSI uses a Stringprep profile for the IQN, which is very similar
>       to (often is) a DNS domain name.
> 
> with
> 
>    o  iSCSI uses a Stringprep profile for the names of protocol participants
>       (called initiators and targets).  The IQN format of iSCSI names contains
>       a reversed DNS domain name.
> 
> -- Appendix A
> 
> The User entry for RFC 3722 (iSCSI) should be "b", not "a".  The iSCSI name
> strings are part of host and storage system configuration; these strings
> are entered by and are visible to administrators.
> 
> -- Appendix B.1 iSCSI Stringprep Profiles: RFC3722, RFC3721, RFC3720
> 
> There is one profile, and it's specified by RFC 3722.  The other two RFCs
> describe the naming design and how the strings are used.  It may not b
> appropriate to list the other two RFCs in the section name.
> 
>    Description:  An iSCSI session consists of an Initiator (i.e., host
>       or server that uses storage) communicating with a target (i.e., a
>       storage array or other system that provides storage).  Both the
>       iSCSI initiator and target are named by iSCSI Names.  The iSCSI
>       stringprep profile is used for iSCSI names.
> 
> Initiator -> initiator in first line.
> 
>    What is the impact if the comparison results in a false positive?
>       Potential access to the wrong storage. - If the initiator has no
>       access to the wrong storage, an authentication failure is the
>       probable result. - If the initiator has access to the worng
>       storage, the resulting mis-identificaiton could result in use of
>       the wrong data and possible corruption of stored data.
> 
> Correct two spelling errors:
>       - worng -> wrong
>       - identificaiton -> identification.
> 
>    What are the security impacts?  iSCSI names are often used as the
>       authentication identities for storage systems.  Comparison
>       problems could result in authentication problems, although note
>       that authentication failure ameliorates some of the false positive
>       cases.
> 
> Change "are often used" to "may be used" in the first line.
> 
>    How much tolerance for change from existing stringprep approach?
>       Good tolerance; the community would prefer that
>       internationalization experts solve internationalization problems
>       ;-).
> 
> Remove the smiley.
> 
> Thanks,
> --David
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