Ben Campbell has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-precis-nickname-18: Yes
When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-precis-nickname/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Yay! Just a few nits: -- Abstract: The abstract could be beefed up against? Maybe say what a nickname is in this context? [Edit: "Against"? I meant "a bit".] -- 1.1, first paragraph: "...participants to specify a nickname ..." Plural agreement mismatch. -- 1.1, 2nd paragraph: People really use "petname" for this? Who knew? _______________________________________________ precis mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/precis
