> On Jun 13, 2017, at 6:06 PM, Peter Saint-Andre <[email protected]> wrote: > > On 6/13/17 4:07 PM, Ben Campbell wrote: >> Hi, >> >> This is my AD evaluation of draft-ietf-precis-7613bis-07. >> >> I think this draft is ready for IETF last call, which I will request >> shortly. I have a few comments, all about references, that I think >> can be handled along with any last call comments. >> >> Thanks! >> >> Ben. ——————— >> >> - Should the references to RFC 7613 in the IANA considerations be >> updated to point to this document? (Some _say_ “this document”). > > Yes, they should. I actually made that change the other day, along with > cross-references to 7564bis instead of RFC 7564 (etc.)... > > https://github.com/stpeter/precis-framework/commit/58e4b072f9838fe4cc454594bff2e6e64daaf73b#diff-3956fe36c870ed54d75e6a05394dd92f
Excellent. Hopefully you’ve already fixed any comments that might come up in IETF last call or IESG review, too :-) > >> - There are some citations to RFC 4013 and 3545 that seem to be >> overtaken by events. For example, there is a statement that 4013 is >> obsoleted by this document, when in fact it was obsoleted by 7613. >> Please check to make sure that any such citations (and their >> surrounding context) will still make sense when this draft is >> published as an RFC. > > Good catch - we'll clean that up. (The references to the older specs > might be appropriate where we're trying to show the historical > continuity of thinking on these issues, but not when we're talking about > which documents this one obsoletes.) > Perfect, thanks! Ben. _______________________________________________ precis mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/precis
