The opening paragraph complies with AP and PR standards but if you want to
reword the sentence beginning with "met with."

 

        

 




 
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From: promotion-boun...@wispa.org [mailto:promotion-boun...@wispa.org] On
Behalf Of Chuck Hogg
Sent: Monday, December 8, 2014 12:53 PM
To: WISPA Board Members List; WISPA Promotion Committee
Subject: Re: [WISPA Promotion] [Board] Fwd: Advocacy Day Press Release

 

The first opening paragraph to me appears to be a run-on sentence.  I think
if you add a semi-colon to break it up, it might read better.

 




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Chuck

 




Regards,
Chuck

 

On Mon, Dec 8, 2014 at 12:52 PM, Chuck Hogg <ch...@shelbybb.com> wrote:

Forbes had originally used the incorrect email for promotions. I fixed in
this forward, continue discussion here please.




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On Mon, Dec 8, 2014 at 12:28 PM, Forbes Mercy <forbes.me...@wabroadband.com>
wrote:

Here is your opportunity to suggest changes, point out typos, etc. This does
go out today.

Thanks,
Forbes

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Date: Dec 8, 2014 8:58 AM
Subject: Advocacy Day Press Release
To: forbes.me...@wabroadband.com
Cc: ebow...@aristotle.net

Hi Forbes,

 

Attached is the draft press release that Elizabeth and I worked on for
distribution today. Could you please let me know if you have any edits? We
may want to send it around to Alex, Chuck and Steve to get their feedback as
well.

 

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