Le 6 oct. 06 à 07:51, Ian Hickson a écrit :
On Thu, 5 Oct 2006 [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:
It is better to not start the [abstract] by "This specification"
Fixed.
Thanks.
Reading the abstract, It is not clear what XBL 2.0 is about. Mozilla
developer site does a better job.
I'm not convinced the Mozilla developer site does a better job, but
I have
attempted to improve the abstract to combine the better parts of both.
Please let me know if the new abstract is not satisfactory:
http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2006/xbl2/Overview.html?
content-type=text/html
Thanks. The first sentence is better, indeed. associate is also
easier to understan than map.
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