I tried to submit this through the online form, but the only response I got was 
"ERROR".  I cannot tell if this means the information was submitted and the 
response was erroneous, or if the information was never submitted properly.

1) In the REFERENCES section:
The link to [DOMCORE] should be updated.  Currently,
        [DOMCORE]
        Web DOM Core, A. van Kesteren. W3C.
points to http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/domcore/raw-file/tip/Overview.html.  When 
navigating to this link, you get a page stating:
        The DOM specification moved to http://dom.spec.whatwg.org/.
(I noted the response is a 200 OK, not a 301 MOVED).  The latter link does, it 
seems, point to the correct document, though I cannot tell if any specific path 
was intended.

2) In the STATUS OF THIS DOCUMENT section:
The 4th paragraph begins "The working groups maintains...".  The number of the 
noun "groups" and the verb "maintains" disagree.

I appreciate the work going into the standards documents, and I know everyone 
wants them to be as perfect as possible.


P.S.  Though I am using a company email address, I do not represent the company 
in any way.

-- Menachem A. Salomon 
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"NEIGHBOR, n. One whom we are commanded to love as ourselves, and who does all 
he knows how to make us disobedient." -- Ambrose Bierce, The Devil's Dictionary



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