Comment from the i18n review of: http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/WD-XMLHttpRequest-20071026/
Comment 1 At http://www.w3.org/International/reviews/0711-xhr/ Editorial/substantive: E Owner: AP Location in reviewed document: general Comment: The introduction is rather stiffly written. Section 2 really should be divided into subsections. Among other things, it is difficult to reference parts of section 2 in its current state.
