Hi Marcin, All fixed.
On Mon, Jun 1, 2009 at 12:44 AM, Marcin Hanclik <[email protected]> wrote: > EDITORIALs > > 6.5 > via a content elements src attribute. > should be > via a content element's src attribute. fixed > "A default start file must appear at either the ..." > "A default start file" is not an anchor. fixed. > > 6.6 > Authoring guideline > "If using [SVG] as an icon format and one intends it to be animated, use > declarative animation." > should be > "If using [SVG] as an icon format with an intention for it to be animated, > use declarative animation." I met you half way: "If using [SVG] as an icon format, and the intention is for it to be animated, then use declarative animation" > 6.7 > "Over the wire (e.g. over HTTP)..." > Maybe something more descriptive could be invented here, since recently the > Web content gets delivered wireless and over HTTP? Right, changed it to "If the protocol over which the widget package is tranferred supports the [MIME] specification, then.." > 6.8 > "A widget file extension is the text string .wgt in any case form..." > What about: > A widget file extension is the text string that case-insensitively matches > the string ".wgt". Used your text. > 7. > All files and folders, except digital signatures ... > should be > All files and folders, except for the digital signatures ... Fixed. > 7.2 > This sections presents three ... > should be > This section presents three ... Fixed. > The purpose of this "fallback" model is to reduce then number of ... > should be > The purpose of this "fallback" model is to reduce the number of ... Fixed. > In this case, to find find the ... > should be > In this case, to find the ... Fixed. > 7.3 > whose folder-name case-sensitively match the string ... > should be > whose folder-name case-sensitively matches the string ... Fixed. -- Marcos Caceres http://datadriven.com.au
