On Wed, Jun 10, 2009 at 4:51 PM, Anne van Kesteren<[email protected]> wrote: > There's no need to recommend something twice so everything after the last > semicolon can be dropped. >
Editorial: Agreed, dropped. > The usage of "inform" here assumes the user agent in question is a > conformance checker. However, it is far more likely that this is a normal > user agent that can run widgets. As such, the usage of inform here is > inappropriate for that class of products. > Editorial: Good point. I changed it to: [[ "In the event that an implementation encounters an invalid Zip archive during the steps for processing a widget package, the user agent must abort all processing of the steps for processing a widget package. In addition, the user agent should notify the end-user that the zip archive is an invalid Zip archive via an appropriate localized error message. The means of notifying the end-user, and the wording of the localized error message, is left to the discretion of implementers. In the case the UA is a CC, it must inform the author that the Zip archive is an invalid Zip archive. ]] Is that any better? -- Marcos Caceres http://datadriven.com.au
