On Sep 13, 2009, at 1:06 PM, ext Marcos Caceres wrote:

On Fri, Sep 11, 2009 at 9:30 PM, Arthur Barstow <[email protected]> wrote:

10. Section 2: Initialization: I don't understand this sentence, which
when
shortened is effectively "The first run through X, prior to runtime.".

How about:

"When a user agent first runs a widget package through the Steps for
Processing a Widget Package, as specified in the [Widgets-Packaging]
specification, prior to runtime."

That boils down to:

When a user agent first runs a widget package through X, prior to runtime.

I still can't parse/grok it but it's probably just me and I'll bug you about
it in IRC (someday) :-).

Perhaps part of the confusion is that "user agent" in the context of this defintion is presumably a P&C user agent yet that qualification isn't made and the only reference to that definition is in Section 6.1 and in that
context the UA is the A&E UA.

Yeah, you nailed it (well, section 4.1 Support of Other Specifications
[1] kinda defined it). Reworked the definition of a UA to:

[[
A user agent is a software implementation that supports:
 * The widget interface.
 * The [Widgets-Packaging] specification.
 * The [Widgets-URI] specification.
 * Storage areas.

1. In the updated definition of Initialization, make the "user agent" a link to the definition of "user agent" in Section 4.


It is optional for a user agent to support the widgets
[Widgets-DigSig] specification.
]]

Why did you add the DigSig text above and new DigSig paragraph below the Note (Section 4)? This spec should focus exclusively on the A&E UA.

-Regards, Art Barstow



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