Hi Robin,

Le 08/02/2010 13:26, Robin Berjon a écrit :
On Feb 4, 2010, at 22:19 , Cyril Concolato wrote:
* "A user agent whose start file implements [HTML5]'s Window  interface MUST 
..."
The start file does not implement anything. The user agent implements. I 
suggest to change it to something like:
"User agent implementing the [HTML5]'s Window interface MUST ..."

You're mostly right, but I see where the original comes from. The UA may 
support Window but not expose it for all start files — e.g. it won't be there 
for a SWF start file. The resulting sentence is going to be clumsy no matter 
what :)

* The step 1 in the initialization of the preference attribute algorithm which says "Establish 
the instance of a widget for this widget and create a storage area that is unique for the 
origin." should probably say "unique for the origin and for that instance."

I'm not sure what you mean? The preference storage should remain available 
across instantiations of the widget. This could probably be rephrased though.
I think that maybe there should be two separate words instead of 'instance' for 
the two notions:
a) "a widget package instantiated twice at the same time"
b) "a widget package instantiated twice at different times".
In a) you have 2 different storage areas. In b) you have only one.

Cyril

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