New texts look nice. Two comments...

- XMLHttpRequest.send() is a good example, but as we go through multiple
states and invokes onreadystatechange multiple times, I prefer not just
quoting "onreadystatechange" but point the one-and-done aspect of XHR by
using phrase like "which triggers onreadystatechange with readyState of
DONE"
- Could you please refrain from pointing the streams API or list both in
the doc until we finish the discussion now we have?

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